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[aid] => mick
[title] => Grow up
[time] => 2002-10-31 19:40:00
[hometext] => I was a new juinor transfer student at Meadowdale High school and i was pretty nervous just walking around. I eventually asked "is this class hard?" to this guy in Sign language. He Wore glasses and had boots with no laces, so i thought it would be ok to talk to him. He got off and called me a "fag" and said he was gonna kick my after school. I met him at the flag pole, gave him this poem and walked home unscathed.
(one of my earlier poems, pretty chopy) (feedback needed) [bodytext] => Men are angry all to often, in a rush to fight. their frozen heart, to dark to soften, will never see the light. They hide behind a wall of rage that seems to set the free I know this wall is just a cage and no one has the key. His hands have been in constant pain from slipping down the social chain the sound of people laughting while their pointing at his face had brought him to the breaking point and put him in his place. I'd plug his ears to stop the noise to me there's nothing sadder than starting with skater boys to climb the social ladder. Bad idea to step to me I'm smarter than the devil you'd think with glasses he could see hes on a lower level... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 346 [topic] => 6 [informant] => playitforward [notes] => .....Edited by mod_6 for language...27-03-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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