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what the Next Day will bring
Well it be a little different
or just the same old thing

You think a change is needed
from the boring life you live
Going to the same places
where there is no one there to give

Give what you have to offer
some friendship and some love
Not idle chatter and drinking
and the usual push and shove

Could you find an amiable place
where you might be able to dance
Maybe a special person
and even a little romance

That would make the Next Day
much easier to bare
To have somebody to talk to
some friendship and love to share

Wouldn't it just be wonderful
to have a life like this
To come home to a lovely person
and be greeted with a kiss

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The Next Day

Contributed by Bruce on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:23:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

You cannot help but wonder
what the Next Day will bring
Well it be a little different
or just the same old thing

You think a change is needed
from the boring life you live
Going to the same places
where there is no one there to give

Give what you have to offer
some friendship and some love
Not idle chatter and drinking
and the usual push and shove

Could you find an amiable place
where you might be able to dance
Maybe a special person
and even a little romance

That would make the Next Day
much easier to bare
To have somebody to talk to
some friendship and love to share

Wouldn't it just be wonderful
to have a life like this
To come home to a lovely person
and be greeted with a kiss

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-08-12 22:23:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:37:16 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem it flows like river and has a lot of emotion. In poetry If you have emotion when you write it, it more then likely express it. Im glad I read it.

~HAKIOKUSAKEN~

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:39:20 PM AEST
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i like this poem. i'm glad i have someone to talk to.:) of course it's you, but i don't think the kissing part. :) well, excellent poem.

love forever,
stew

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:10:07 AM AEST
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Im home honey!! Bruce another enjoyable write forgive me I just got back from bowling a little hyper!
Michelle

Re: The Next Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:38:08 AM AEST
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Very sweet.

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