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Array ( [sid] => 59932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Split Personalities are Not Good for Your Healt [time] => 2004-08-12 19:44:07 [hometext] => first poem in a little while. Comments please. [bodytext] => My nauseous pit of a stomach,
Its burining
Buring,
somebodyhelpme!
My empty canvas of a head,
Is painting these nightmares,
its calling me names,
Take me to the park for my excecution,
Im a man no more,
My inner demons take me over and I dont want it,
Release is the only way to save me and yourself. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ripper_Something_Unusual [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Split Personalities are Not Good for Your Healt

Contributed by Ripper_Something_Unusual on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My nauseous pit of a stomach,
Its burining
Buring,
somebodyhelpme!
My empty canvas of a head,
Is painting these nightmares,
its calling me names,
Take me to the park for my excecution,
Im a man no more,
My inner demons take me over and I dont want it,
Release is the only way to save me and yourself.

Copyright © Ripper_Something_Unusual ... [ 2004-08-12 19:44:07]
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Re: Split Personalities are Not Good for Your Healt (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 10:08:08 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write...i loke it alot...excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Split Personalities are Not Good for Your Healt (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:11:35 PM AEST
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yes it is good and specifically (cause isn't that best?) the "somebodyhelpme!" is so cool, I sooo dig the run together words and this is placed quite well. Second, Hell ya there's more, I love the whole stomach then head thing, I like the the shortness of this too, it need not be long. The "Im a man no more" is a place where I paused and came back to (it has spawed thought like, well, salmon?) Great job!

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