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Array ( [sid] => 59919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This pain [time] => 2004-08-12 18:23:07 [hometext] => I wrote this song when I was in the 4th grade, so I hope you enjoy!!!!! [bodytext] => Verse1:
Flowers and candy won't take this pain away,
You said you loved me but why didn't you stay,
Tried to look so sad so I could take you back,
See boy it don't won't like that,
One time I was very weak,
Couldn't stand on my feet,
But I got strong and brave,
Cause this girl can't take no more pain,
Why is it lying time after time,
Now it's time for me to say goodbye

Chorus:
I gave my heart to you,
Now I don't know what to do,
Don't need no one who can hurt me,
I was just to blind to see,
There was just no chemistry,
And this pain is killing me

Verse 2:
So you say sorry I broke your heart,
I knew when we got together you had a heart,
Basically I know you were cheatin',
Running around here creepin',
Staring in my eyes and lying,
To many nights I was crying,
Over something that wasen't meant to be,
You made a commitment to be with me,
But you broke it so how can we be a family

Chorus:
I gave my heart to you,
Now I don't know what to do,
Don't need no one who can hurt me,
I was just to blind to see,
There was just no chemistry,
And this pain is killing me

Bridge:
Pushed my love away,
Then got mad didn't stay,
Took me as your wife, then wanna cheat,
Told me that you still loved me,
In your eyes I know you don't,
And I'm gettin' a divorce cause I won't,
Allow you to treat me this way,
Cause this girl can't take no more pain

Repeat Chorus till fade


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This pain

Contributed by Luckycharm on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:23:07 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Verse1:
Flowers and candy won't take this pain away,
You said you loved me but why didn't you stay,
Tried to look so sad so I could take you back,
See boy it don't won't like that,
One time I was very weak,
Couldn't stand on my feet,
But I got strong and brave,
Cause this girl can't take no more pain,
Why is it lying time after time,
Now it's time for me to say goodbye

Chorus:
I gave my heart to you,
Now I don't know what to do,
Don't need no one who can hurt me,
I was just to blind to see,
There was just no chemistry,
And this pain is killing me

Verse 2:
So you say sorry I broke your heart,
I knew when we got together you had a heart,
Basically I know you were cheatin',
Running around here creepin',
Staring in my eyes and lying,
To many nights I was crying,
Over something that wasen't meant to be,
You made a commitment to be with me,
But you broke it so how can we be a family

Chorus:
I gave my heart to you,
Now I don't know what to do,
Don't need no one who can hurt me,
I was just to blind to see,
There was just no chemistry,
And this pain is killing me

Bridge:
Pushed my love away,
Then got mad didn't stay,
Took me as your wife, then wanna cheat,
Told me that you still loved me,
In your eyes I know you don't,
And I'm gettin' a divorce cause I won't,
Allow you to treat me this way,
Cause this girl can't take no more pain

Repeat Chorus till fade






Copyright © Luckycharm ... [ 2004-08-12 18:23:07]
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Re: This pain (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:44:04 PM AEST
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very very good :D!! awesome stuff for grade 4.


Re: This pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:08:27 PM AEST
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I agree with waos ! Wish I could have been writing even half as well in the 4th grade ! Then maybe it wouldn't be so tough now !! Great song !!

Naz ~





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