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Array ( [sid] => 59889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Twisting [time] => 2004-08-12 15:40:14 [hometext] => Just random thoughts.. trying to recover from writer's block.. [bodytext] => Twisting in and out of context
My thoughts attempt confusion
Dreams and fears conflicting
Pain held back; restricted

Frozen fingers clawing at scarred skin
Attempting to break through to within
Deadly nightshade; afraid of the dark?
Evergreen with envy

Pay the penny ransom
To return me to your state
You gave me the ocean
But made me fill it with my tears

What's the point in full stops
Life goes on turning
And twisting and killing
Relight the fire; carry on burning [comments] => 6 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 13 [informant] => afraid_of_fear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Twisting

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:40:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Twisting in and out of context
My thoughts attempt confusion
Dreams and fears conflicting
Pain held back; restricted

Frozen fingers clawing at scarred skin
Attempting to break through to within
Deadly nightshade; afraid of the dark?
Evergreen with envy

Pay the penny ransom
To return me to your state
You gave me the ocean
But made me fill it with my tears

What's the point in full stops
Life goes on turning
And twisting and killing
Relight the fire; carry on burning

Copyright © afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-08-12 15:40:14]
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Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:11:18 PM AEST
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HEY GIRLFRIEND!!!!!! This is an awesome comeback from writer's block! You put alot of emotion in this one and it just flows with precision! Sure miss reading your works!
((((((myfriend))))) 0:-)
Angel always...joni

Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:42:14 PM AEST
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this is a very intense to the point poem - really enjoyed reading this effort!

Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:20:12 PM AEST
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excellent nice use of words quite intense very good poem thank you xgripx

Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 07:28:11 PM AEST
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Hey there I thought u left the site, but this was
posted like a week and a half ago. I thought
this was quite good, but to be honest I don't
see how the 3rd stanza fit in with the rest of
the poem. In any case I hope to see more
from you soon.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:37:01 PM AEST
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another gooden
i really like your style

5/5

x x x

Re: Twisting (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:15:31 PM AEST
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nice work char.
this was really deep girl, emotional and awesome.
loved this write. greatly done.
post more soon :P
Becky

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