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But the knife is so close to my neck
Should I cry or destroy you, or try to avoid you
Will it matter when there’s nothing left

Can I count on you to slit my throat
You don’t know what it means to me
Every ******* moment, you will ****** know it
You’re my dearest killing machine

You’re all I ever want
You’re all I ever need
You are my only drug
You are my killing machine

You’re all I ever asked for
You’re all I ever got
I’ll give you one more bullet
If you’re willing to take one more shot

Days like this are always black and white
I never know what you’re thinking
Your head hangs low, and tears start to flow
That’s when my heart starts sinking

I know your middle name is destruction
You never ever know when to stop
You’ll tear apart, my broken heart
And let me bleed till the final drop
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My Killing Machine

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:13:28 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I try to make the best of a bad situation
But the knife is so close to my neck
Should I cry or destroy you, or try to avoid you
Will it matter when there’s nothing left

Can I count on you to slit my throat
You don’t know what it means to me
Every ******* moment, you will ****** know it
You’re my dearest killing machine

You’re all I ever want
You’re all I ever need
You are my only drug
You are my killing machine

You’re all I ever asked for
You’re all I ever got
I’ll give you one more bullet
If you’re willing to take one more shot

Days like this are always black and white
I never know what you’re thinking
Your head hangs low, and tears start to flow
That’s when my heart starts sinking

I know your middle name is destruction
You never ever know when to stop
You’ll tear apart, my broken heart
And let me bleed till the final drop

Copyright Â© paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-08-12 01:13:28]
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Re: My Killing Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by dartsofplsre87 on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:26:56 AM AEST
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This is really good and deep. I liked it.

Re: My Killing Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 03:03:46 AM AEST
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you are one good lyricist.i really like these lines: I’ll give you one more bullet
If you’re willing to take one more shot.
This was soooo good

Re: My Killing Machine (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:30:01 PM AEST
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" I’ll give you one more bullet
If you’re willing to take one more shot "

I like the whole song, loved those lines. I wish I could hear it as you do, be privy to the way you heard it as you wrote. Very good write.

Naz ~

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