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Don’t you ever tire of making me miserable? Doesn’t that ever get boring? Do you hate me? Do you get some sort of pleasure out of this, out of making people cower and cringe and cry and fight and fall? Is this your idea of giving life? Is this life to you? Do you understand what it feels like to hurt this much? Can you even imagine the pain that you force to happen? Can you see the pain and terror and shame and torture and emptiness in my eyes, in my face, in my heart? What is it like to be you? What is it like to kill and rob and torture and disappoint and disillusion and discard? Why does it have to be this way? Why do you have to cause so many of the bad things to totally outnumber the already minimal good things? Why do the good things have to be minimal? What happened to bad things being a part of life just like good things? How can they be just like one another if one so ultimately crushes the other? What is this supposed to accomplish? Am I supposed to come running to you for help because of all of the problems and bad things that you are making in my life? Am I supposed to bow to your awesomeness because you cause all of this and can fix it just as simply? I hope that you are at least enjoying the view, the show, horror movie you have created.
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dear god

Contributed by shorty013 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Dear god,

Don’t you ever tire of making me miserable? Doesn’t that ever get boring? Do you hate me? Do you get some sort of pleasure out of this, out of making people cower and cringe and cry and fight and fall? Is this your idea of giving life? Is this life to you? Do you understand what it feels like to hurt this much? Can you even imagine the pain that you force to happen? Can you see the pain and terror and shame and torture and emptiness in my eyes, in my face, in my heart? What is it like to be you? What is it like to kill and rob and torture and disappoint and disillusion and discard? Why does it have to be this way? Why do you have to cause so many of the bad things to totally outnumber the already minimal good things? Why do the good things have to be minimal? What happened to bad things being a part of life just like good things? How can they be just like one another if one so ultimately crushes the other? What is this supposed to accomplish? Am I supposed to come running to you for help because of all of the problems and bad things that you are making in my life? Am I supposed to bow to your awesomeness because you cause all of this and can fix it just as simply? I hope that you are at least enjoying the view, the show, horror movie you have created.




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Re: dear god (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 08:36:06 PM AEST
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In order to get your answers You have to first read his word and seek him. then you will find out that most of your feelings about him is not what you think. you will find he is totally different.... glad you wrote your feelings down. you will get your answers.. write to me. lets talk.


Re: dear god (User Rating: 1 )
by hrpuffnstuff on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:58:53 PM AEST
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i loved this poem, its exactly how i feel bout god at the mo.
great write
love hayley


Re: dear god (User Rating: 1 )
by ps_ihateyou on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:07:22 AM AEST
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i really liked it. i felt that way before too...




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