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Array ( [sid] => 59676 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One memory I have is this... [time] => 2004-08-10 23:00:51 [hometext] => In attempt to help... [bodytext] => One memory I have is this:
a pretty girl in jeans,
crying before me,
her hands steadily wiping...
the tears from her face.

I remember walking
down the stairs to her,
hugging her, comforting her,
as she cries on my shoulder.

I remember the mess
of her long brown hair,
the muffled sniffling sounds she made
in that little rocking chair.

I remember sorrow,
the weight of heartbreak
filling that small room.

I remember the sympathy
I poured over her,
in attempt to
wash the pain away.

I remember her wet tears
staining her otherwise beautiful face;
the sadness all around her.

I knew nothing would ease
the pain, but time,
and a new love...
ahead
into better times,
away from the past,
leaving her tears behind. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

One memory I have is this...

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:00:51 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

One memory I have is this:
a pretty girl in jeans,
crying before me,
her hands steadily wiping...
the tears from her face.

I remember walking
down the stairs to her,
hugging her, comforting her,
as she cries on my shoulder.

I remember the mess
of her long brown hair,
the muffled sniffling sounds she made
in that little rocking chair.

I remember sorrow,
the weight of heartbreak
filling that small room.

I remember the sympathy
I poured over her,
in attempt to
wash the pain away.

I remember her wet tears
staining her otherwise beautiful face;
the sadness all around her.

I knew nothing would ease
the pain, but time,
and a new love...
ahead
into better times,
away from the past,
leaving her tears behind.

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-08-10 23:00:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One memory I have is this... (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:02:27 AM AEST
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"I remember sorrow,
the weight of heartbreak
filling that small room." interesting word choice. a strong poem over all shows the importance to keep going.... A++++

Re: One memory I have is this... (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:23:01 PM AEST
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another great one......something in this really hit home for me and i'm not sure why as of yet....as soon as i know you will know :)

Re: One memory I have is this... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:38:09 PM AEST
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D*amn! This brings back painful memories to me although they were from many decades ago. You're very sweet to have tried to comfort her, I had a few friends like that. This is a beautiful write! Cheers!

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