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Array ( [sid] => 59631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => True Love [time] => 2004-08-10 14:44:57 [hometext] => I'm looking for constructive criticism to make this poem better. Also I can't figure out if this is an anger or a lost love poem. Please Comment [bodytext] => Hugs with kisses that are true
My life is lived just for you
A rose for you when we meet
Together I feel so complete
A special plan for me that day
To see my lover where she stays
I unlock the door to get by
Only to see her legs held high
I felt a fusion of torrent tears
Rapturous moans torment my ears
I went to my car to grab my knife
To meet this man who stole my wife…
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Hakiokusaken [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

True Love

Contributed by Hakiokusaken on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Hugs with kisses that are true
My life is lived just for you
A rose for you when we meet
Together I feel so complete
A special plan for me that day
To see my lover where she stays
I unlock the door to get by
Only to see her legs held high
I felt a fusion of torrent tears
Rapturous moans torment my ears
I went to my car to grab my knife
To meet this man who stole my wife…

Copyright Â© Hakiokusaken ... [ 2004-08-10 14:44:57]
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Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:18:11 AM AEST
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great write, hope it didn't happen that way, but if it did i would have been right there with u

Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:08:04 AM AEST
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soo soo much emotion, so powerful. The ending had me. Good work

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