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Array ( [sid] => 59564 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sirens - secluded ghost [time] => 2004-08-10 01:16:59 [hometext] => PLease have a read, comments are always good. corrupted_minds [bodytext] => Sirens - secluded ghost

Siren’s calling I hear her voice.
It lures me near, I have no choice,
The sweetest tune, it tempts the weak,
The ones alone with the life that’s bleak,
Nothing to run from, nothing to fear,
She wanted to help, she’s pulling me near,
I’m frail and cold, I feel her ardor,
I have nothing but a broken core,
I’ve had my life of pain and curse,
And with each day this hardship’s worse,
The vamp is calling, she calms my soul,
She let me out from this graven hole,
I want to leave, I stay for no man,
This hell of a world I cannot stand,

The siren controls me she leads the way,
To the ocean where the mermaids play,
The icy water reaches me feet but yet I cannot feel,
And there on the hazy beach I slowly begin to heal,
The moon of night it brings the light,
I walk closer to see the sight,
The clouds are grey, there’s rain and thunder,
The rising water pulls me under,
There alone I start to sink,
And after all this time I start to think,
I did have love, I lost to most,
And now I’ve become a secluded ghost,
But in my grave right by the sea,
That’s where you’ll always remember me
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 404 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
sirens - secluded ghost

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:16:59 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Sirens - secluded ghost

Siren’s calling I hear her voice.
It lures me near, I have no choice,
The sweetest tune, it tempts the weak,
The ones alone with the life that’s bleak,
Nothing to run from, nothing to fear,
She wanted to help, she’s pulling me near,
I’m frail and cold, I feel her ardor,
I have nothing but a broken core,
I’ve had my life of pain and curse,
And with each day this hardship’s worse,
The vamp is calling, she calms my soul,
She let me out from this graven hole,
I want to leave, I stay for no man,
This hell of a world I cannot stand,

The siren controls me she leads the way,
To the ocean where the mermaids play,
The icy water reaches me feet but yet I cannot feel,
And there on the hazy beach I slowly begin to heal,
The moon of night it brings the light,
I walk closer to see the sight,
The clouds are grey, there’s rain and thunder,
The rising water pulls me under,
There alone I start to sink,
And after all this time I start to think,
I did have love, I lost to most,
And now I’ve become a secluded ghost,
But in my grave right by the sea,
That’s where you’ll always remember me




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Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:28:14 AM AEST
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wow, that was really good loretta, really good

Cj Ranson

xoxox


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:34:03 AM AEST
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GREAT WRITE!! INCREDIBLE!! that was really really
good. I throw roses at your feet! Its like ever poem you
write sets a whole new standard! excellent work.

love always, dizza
xoxoxox


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:56:03 AM AEST
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I like how this reads like a story, and your use of visuals is good. keep up the excellent work.


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 11:29:13 AM AEST
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great write,

pixie xx


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 08:05:53 PM AEST
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I am in awe of this poem. Another great poem by you.absoluty brilliant the whole siren theme was well put. I cant tell you how much I like this poem. Wow.

Hakiokusaken


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:56:02 AM AEST
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this is scary stuff!
only yesterday, i posted up a poem called "the angel of innocence", and most of your poem reflects on mine.
take a read of it... you may or may not find it interesting but still, please read it, and please comment on my other poems.


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:23:51 AM AEST
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This is a good write. You have a very good imagination.


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 06:04:29 PM AEST
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nicce


Re: sirens - secluded ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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Really great write.




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