 |
Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
|
||||
| Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 15:45:26 AEST | ||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
|
||||
|
Array
(
[sid] => 59561
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The end of my life
[time] => 2004-08-10 00:49:02
[hometext] => i wrote this when my ex left me
[bodytext] => there are so many ways to tell you how i feel but there's only one way to show you that it's real i take your hand as i get down on one knee i pull out a box and ask you if you'l marry me if all goes well my wish will come true my wish is to spend the rest of my life with you you covered your face as your the tears fell onto your dress you hugged me and told me your answer was yes i hug you and my body begins to shake i never thought this feeling would be so great we drive home with tears still streaming down we're both so happy but we can't make a sound we walk into the house to see a message was left it was a man saying you are one he'll never forget as my body tightens up i run out the door i'm crying hysterically as i fall to the floor you try to talk to me but i just push you away i've given up on caring about what you have to say i was so good to you, didn't that matter i guess not because it's my whole life you've shattered i get up and drive off to a place far from her a place where a morbid death i will endure i arrive at an abandoned factory where i get my gun i take out all the bullets but leave just one i raise the gun and push it to my head i've decided that i'd be happier if i were dead my hand starts to shake from all of my fear i really wish that you were here i regain control of myself and i pull the trigger my soul lifts to the sky as the puddle of blood gets bigger a few days later my story was on the news who ever thought that such a positive man this world would lose [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 48 [informant] => lonely_boy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
|
Menu
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©
Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster
All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com
All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.
Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com