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Array ( [sid] => 59503 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => come and die [time] => 2004-08-09 16:27:48 [hometext] => you came and lived now its time to come and die... [bodytext] => rest your tired head on my light shoulders
my arms,tightly wrapped around your waist
you sniff and a dry tear comes rolling down your cheek
i lift up my soft finger and i wipe that tear away
like i did with your sufference
i helped you
i helped you live
you are not in debt no need to repay
you are just coming,to the end of your day
your heads slipping off my shoulder
it lands apon my lap
i feel the rush of thoughts
and i smile
i kiss your head
and it freezes like so many have done
the kiss of death
is such a wonderful thing
your eyes flicker
your hand losens
and your grip on my flesh falls
you came and lived
now its time to come and die...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

come and die

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:27:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

rest your tired head on my light shoulders
my arms,tightly wrapped around your waist
you sniff and a dry tear comes rolling down your cheek
i lift up my soft finger and i wipe that tear away
like i did with your sufference
i helped you
i helped you live
you are not in debt no need to repay
you are just coming,to the end of your day
your heads slipping off my shoulder
it lands apon my lap
i feel the rush of thoughts
and i smile
i kiss your head
and it freezes like so many have done
the kiss of death
is such a wonderful thing
your eyes flicker
your hand losens
and your grip on my flesh falls
you came and lived
now its time to come and die...

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-08-09 16:27:48]
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Re: come and die (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:50:55 PM AEST
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good write.

Re: come and die (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:52:27 PM AEST
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wow! that is an interesting poem. i wish death would be that easy.

love forever
stew

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