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Array ( [sid] => 59498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GETTING RID OF YOU [time] => 2004-08-09 16:06:11 [hometext] => it came up out of no where i need help to get over it.............please comment on it or vote i really......really would liek to know what you all think about my write i need to know if i have talent or if i'm playing at a hopless game [bodytext] => so this is how it begins
you reel me in and hurt me again
is it my pain you seek
is this your technique
lift me into the sun filled sky then drop me in a state to cry
I’ve had enough of your foolish games,
all your sweet talk causes pain
I thought what we had was true
I even let myself trust you
Now I see through your discuss
You’re evil plots and your lies
All your prying
All my crying
Inside I am dying
But through all the sleepless nights
I realized what was right
Know I now what I should do
I need to get rid of you
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GETTING RID OF YOU

Contributed by alyssakoren_03 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:06:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

so this is how it begins
you reel me in and hurt me again
is it my pain you seek
is this your technique
lift me into the sun filled sky then drop me in a state to cry
I’ve had enough of your foolish games,
all your sweet talk causes pain
I thought what we had was true
I even let myself trust you
Now I see through your discuss
You’re evil plots and your lies
All your prying
All my crying
Inside I am dying
But through all the sleepless nights
I realized what was right
Know I now what I should do
I need to get rid of you

Copyright © alyssakoren_03 ... [ 2004-08-09 16:06:11]
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Re: GETTING RID OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:10:04 PM AEST
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I thought it was good, and since I've got this thing going on with a guy I can relate to it. I think you've got talent and the more you write the more it'll develop. Good job.

Re: GETTING RID OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:54:30 PM AEST
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I vote that you have alot of talent... the spelling mistakes cut away from the poem, but it was a great poem. Hands down.

Jaime

Re: GETTING RID OF YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:14:43 PM AEST
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this is one of my fave poems you wrote. its written very well with words that really set the scene. i lovee it!

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