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And with all my might I've tried
To make her smile, if ever she cried
when I see her sad
My heart stops beating
My world falls apart
and I start feeling my eyes weeping

I dont know what to do or say
to satisfy her is all I convey
I gave her my heart with all my love
But no matter what I do, it's never enough

All I asked for is someone to love
All I yearn for is to hold her in my arms

And even though she brightens up my day with her smile
In the end she'll break my heart
And end it's eternal useless beating with dismay that's futile [comments] => 6 [counter] => 404 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ender [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Eternal Heartache

Contributed by ender on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She makes me happy, She makes me fly
And with all my might I've tried
To make her smile, if ever she cried
when I see her sad
My heart stops beating
My world falls apart
and I start feeling my eyes weeping

I dont know what to do or say
to satisfy her is all I convey
I gave her my heart with all my love
But no matter what I do, it's never enough

All I asked for is someone to love
All I yearn for is to hold her in my arms

And even though she brightens up my day with her smile
In the end she'll break my heart
And end it's eternal useless beating with dismay that's futile

Copyright Â© ender ... [ 2002-10-30 20:20:00]
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Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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This is beautiful
I enjoyed reading this
very heartfelt
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Angel on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:30:59 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. although sad, it's really good. it reminds me of my old relationship.

Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by stephy on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 03:26:11 AM AEST
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nicely written... yet sad at the same time. it starts out happier then it ends. it portrays someone who has been hurt before and is afraid the same will happen again with the next love... my main thoughts: don't ever give up on love. not everyone is out to use and hurt you. very nice write.

Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Sage on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 04:56:27 AM AEST
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Nice write,know how hard it is sometimes to express feelings that are deep.All the best Sage

Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:34:51 AM AEST
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Great poem...it's a little sad, but I think there are people who can really relate to this.

Lasca

Re: The Eternal Heartache (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 06:11:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful write..tho a bit sad...Well done!!! I kinda agree with Stephy...
Jenni

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