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[title] => ~So I ask~
[time] => 2004-08-09 13:28:43
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[bodytext] => ~Can you hear me as I pray, can you take all fears before I break, can you see what I wish to make, can you feel for me when my truths are fake, can you save me from thoughts that come like raging waves, can you send me unwavering love like a father to his son, can you when my tears fall look me in tha eye and say that I am strong, can you bring me among tha light when in shadows my will so fights, can you when I grow weak remind me of what I seek, can you clear tha path ahead when I see no means to tread as hope becomes dead, can you give back all that I had not whished to forget and take tha dreams that only left regret, can you bring me to a place where sadness shall never embrace, can you fill me with strength when I detest my fate when so met, can you release me from all that I need and free these restraints which make me bleed, can you when my trust gives to rot show why I fought to leave tha plot, can you not allow my heart to die when buried under amassing lies, can you give me shelter from tha unending storm that dwells within, can you when I have lost tha words I needed to say freeze time so I may find them upon another day~
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~So I ask~
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LoelIntrepid
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:28:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~Can you hear me as I pray, can you take all fears before I break, can you see what I wish to make, can you feel for me when my truths are fake, can you save me from thoughts that come like raging waves, can you send me unwavering love like a father to his son, can you when my tears fall look me in tha eye and say that I am strong, can you bring me among tha light when in shadows my will so fights, can you when I grow weak remind me of what I seek, can you clear tha path ahead when I see no means to tread as hope becomes dead, can you give back all that I had not whished to forget and take tha dreams that only left regret, can you bring me to a place where sadness shall never embrace, can you fill me with strength when I detest my fate when so met, can you release me from all that I need and free these restraints which make me bleed, can you when my trust gives to rot show why I fought to leave tha plot, can you not allow my heart to die when buried under amassing lies, can you give me shelter from tha unending storm that dwells within, can you when I have lost tha words I needed to say freeze time so I may find them upon another day~
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Re: ~So I ask~
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by Crimson_Rose on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:25:00 PM AEST
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| Wow, great write. Very poweful and full of meaning. |
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Re: ~So I ask~
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by Loellntrepid on
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| ~So I ask should I stay or should I leave for when it came to be that you no longer desired me you left me broken to forever bleed though scars unseen~ |
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Re: ~So I ask~
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by Loellntrepid on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 12:01:45 PM AEST
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