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Lovers
Contributed by
tlhInganHom
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Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 12:13:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Two curious kids,
a razor blade,
forbiddance amid;
the night was made.
She climbed astride,
the light was out,
he closed his eyes,
and saw no doubt.
His pounding heart
allowed no thought;
his sweat was hot,
her whisper soft.
Her presence real,
he bit his lip
and felt cool steel
accross his skin.
She was a tease,
who dealt in fear;
was always pleased
when she could hear
a painful cry,
the slit of flesh,
a sultry sigh;
a wound that's fresh.
His neck so young,
her kisses spread.
He felt her tongue,
for he had bled.
Their eyes met fast
with love and trust,
and soon surpassed
boundries of lust.
Against her breast,
She held him close.
So sound they slept;
the sun arose.
July 21, 2004
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tlhInganHom
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Re: Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:34:42 AM AEST
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| Magnificant poem! |
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Re: Lovers
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by venkat on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:40:30 AM AEST
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chilling and romantic..o.k ..keep 'em coming on.
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Re: Lovers
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:37:37 PM AEST
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Wow, where was I when this got posted ? This is a great write, well flowing read, and has a sexy darkness to it. Really cool !! Looking forward to more !!!
Nazmythian ~
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