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Array ( [sid] => 59373 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead [time] => 2004-08-08 15:59:49 [hometext] => The thought of suicide, is very sad. But most people have them every day. Some people cause them to think and feel this way. [bodytext] => I'm dead just like you
you never knew all the joy I had with you
pushing away wanting to go
wishing to leave
learning the truth
feeling useless
feeling pain
as the razorblade slides down with ease
all emotions gone
nothing new wanting to go
leaving this hell hole never to return
never to see you again.
I'm dead just like you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Lovely_4_Steve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Dead

Contributed by Lovely_4_Steve on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I'm dead just like you
you never knew all the joy I had with you
pushing away wanting to go
wishing to leave
learning the truth
feeling useless
feeling pain
as the razorblade slides down with ease
all emotions gone
nothing new wanting to go
leaving this hell hole never to return
never to see you again.
I'm dead just like you




Copyright © Lovely_4_Steve ... [ 2004-08-08 15:59:49]
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Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:02:31 PM AEST
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This is amazing. So short but truly full of emotion.

A truly great poem

sleepless_siren


Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaylynne on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 06:19:46 PM AEST
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this is a realy great poem it is so real and full of emotion keep up the good work,

~*Jaylynne


Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:26:12 PM AEST
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damn....i mean wow this is....just..wow. pure emotion. awesome write!
Brynna


Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by TheBlackVoid on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:29:43 AM AEST
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Very sad and emotion filled. great write and all so true
Alucia,




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