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Array ( [sid] => 59366 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Feeling of not Feeling anything [time] => 2004-08-08 13:24:57 [hometext] => sry for any and all errors i get lazy when i type [bodytext] => I hide from my fears
and I hide from my pain
thats what i became
I hid from everything
and I never grew
I became what wasent me
and people saw right threw
Like a gapeing hole within
without a chest to hold a pin
my pain and fears
for everyone to see
so blunt and true
these horriable feelings
were just to new
a crushed heart
and a broken soul
the feeling of being lost
with no where to go
a broken home
a crooked picture
the feeling no one is there
I ran from my problems
but they cought me
I hid from reality
but it found me
water stains on my face
from the tears I cryed
dry mouth
from the tears I tasted
an empty room
for the life that I wasted

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Luka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Feeling of not Feeling anything

Contributed by Luka on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:24:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hide from my fears
and I hide from my pain
thats what i became
I hid from everything
and I never grew
I became what wasent me
and people saw right threw
Like a gapeing hole within
without a chest to hold a pin
my pain and fears
for everyone to see
so blunt and true
these horriable feelings
were just to new
a crushed heart
and a broken soul
the feeling of being lost
with no where to go
a broken home
a crooked picture
the feeling no one is there
I ran from my problems
but they cought me
I hid from reality
but it found me
water stains on my face
from the tears I cryed
dry mouth
from the tears I tasted
an empty room
for the life that I wasted

Copyright © Luka ... [ 2004-08-08 13:24:57]
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Re: The Feeling of not Feeling anything (User Rating: 1 )
by Lizard on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:39:07 PM AEST
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Hey there Luka!
I really liked your poem. I know exactally what it is like to try and hide your fears. No matter what you do they will still come out so you need to face them instead of hiding them. If it can work for me I think that it will work for you! Your words are great because they express who you are! Have a great day and keep your chin up!

this is Lizard signing off!

Re: The Feeling of not Feeling anything (User Rating: 1 )
by tlhInganHom on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:46:19 PM AEST
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Nice rhythm, good work :-)

Re: The Feeling of not Feeling anything (User Rating: 1 )
by TheBlackVoid on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:32:20 AM AEST
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Wow! just awesome! i loved this poem so touching and once again i can relate in many ways. great write
Alucia,

Re: The Feeling of not Feeling anything (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:06:37 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write...i know the feeling...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: The Feeling of not Feeling anything (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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I've read everything you've posted and I like this one the most!!! It says a lot to me because i've been there and i'm still going through it I can sit here and tell you you're not alone but I don't think it'll make you feel any better because it doesn't help me when others say that but I do wanna say you're pretty talented i love the way you wrote this excellent job!!
Much love,
Shelbi

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