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Array ( [sid] => 59309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-08-08 00:23:29 [hometext] => I wrote this because I was really upset/mad at the world for what I have been forced to be put through. But it like everything else was a faze that comes and goes and i am fine for the time being. [bodytext] => Mommy Dearest,
it is with much regret that I tell you
my heart is filled with sadness
for what I am about to do.

I ask you not to cry.
I ask you not to mourn.
You couldn't understand
When I said " I am not my own".

Hold your head up high,
one foot in front of the other.
Your life is not over.
Your world has not yet crashed down.

Soon you will forget
All the pain I showed you.
Soon you will forget
All my built up hatred.

Many days will follow
when you wish to follow my lead.
But I must ask you to stay, do not follow me.
And if you must know, no it did not hurt.

Please let Daddy know
that in my heart I love him.
Please let him know that I forgive him
for all the hell he put me through.

Tell him not to cry.
I doubt that he even would.
But just in case he does,
remind him that I was a lost cause.

Bryce can have my room,
I know he always wanted it.
Let Reigh know he won,
he was always stronger then I ever was.

Tell them it was an accident.
Cover up the bloody truth.
Save them from the pain
of knowing what I've gone and done.

I think this is all.
No more needs to be said.
When you come accross the note,
I am sad to say I will most likely be dead.

Just one more request from me.
This is all I ask,
when the time comes to put me in my grave,
on the stone have it say:

"Forever i must bid adieu.
It is time to turn out my light,
I lost in the good fight.
And a sorrowful tata to you."





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Untitled

Contributed by NobodySpecial on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:23:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Mommy Dearest,
it is with much regret that I tell you
my heart is filled with sadness
for what I am about to do.

I ask you not to cry.
I ask you not to mourn.
You couldn't understand
When I said " I am not my own".

Hold your head up high,
one foot in front of the other.
Your life is not over.
Your world has not yet crashed down.

Soon you will forget
All the pain I showed you.
Soon you will forget
All my built up hatred.

Many days will follow
when you wish to follow my lead.
But I must ask you to stay, do not follow me.
And if you must know, no it did not hurt.

Please let Daddy know
that in my heart I love him.
Please let him know that I forgive him
for all the hell he put me through.

Tell him not to cry.
I doubt that he even would.
But just in case he does,
remind him that I was a lost cause.

Bryce can have my room,
I know he always wanted it.
Let Reigh know he won,
he was always stronger then I ever was.

Tell them it was an accident.
Cover up the bloody truth.
Save them from the pain
of knowing what I've gone and done.

I think this is all.
No more needs to be said.
When you come accross the note,
I am sad to say I will most likely be dead.

Just one more request from me.
This is all I ask,
when the time comes to put me in my grave,
on the stone have it say:

"Forever i must bid adieu.
It is time to turn out my light,
I lost in the good fight.
And a sorrowful tata to you."









Copyright © NobodySpecial ... [ 2004-08-08 00:23:29]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by tlhInganHom on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:27:19 AM AEST
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OooooOooOoOooo.... Angsty ;-)

I like that it has some rythem. Free-verse angsty poetry just doesn't cut it; you gotta have stanzas!

I rather enjoyed the last stanza, by the way.

On a side note,
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:53:28 AM AEST
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amazing and emotional write.


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:41:18 AM AEST
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Well I'm happy to hear it was a faze and I pray u never feel this way again as it's heart breaking.
If I read between the lines correctly I understand how u could feel this way yet I hope I'm thinking wrong.
Hang tuff don't let anyone ever get u this low again.
luv, huggs, prayer, tears,
emy


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 01:56:12 PM AEST
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Thisis a great poem...excellent write...i know the feeling....good job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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This is sad and I like it




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