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Array ( [sid] => 59288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever and Beyond [time] => 2004-08-07 19:26:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw this guy
Just walking on the street
I couldn't believe what happened
That both of our eyes could meet.

But both of us just kept walking
And didn't look back
I'm sorry that I didn't
Now my life is black.

I had no idea
That you were the one for me
I wish I would've known
I wish I could've seen.

For that night I had a dream
A dream I couldn't believe
You were there holding me
That was something I wanted to achieve.

But thankfully we met again
I didn't waste any time
I went right on over to you
And said a pretty rhyme...

"Of you I am very fond
And we will be together
Forever and beyond!" [comments] => 5 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Stew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Forever and Beyond

Contributed by Stew on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 07:26:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I saw this guy
Just walking on the street
I couldn't believe what happened
That both of our eyes could meet.

But both of us just kept walking
And didn't look back
I'm sorry that I didn't
Now my life is black.

I had no idea
That you were the one for me
I wish I would've known
I wish I could've seen.

For that night I had a dream
A dream I couldn't believe
You were there holding me
That was something I wanted to achieve.

But thankfully we met again
I didn't waste any time
I went right on over to you
And said a pretty rhyme...

"Of you I am very fond
And we will be together
Forever and beyond!"

Copyright © Stew ... [ 2004-08-07 19:26:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forever and Beyond (User Rating: 1 )
by nickyboy on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 08:23:20 PM AEST
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I think that this is a good one. Gee it kinda makes me wish i was brave enough to go up to girls and tell them like that.

GOOD JOB. keep it up

Re: Forever and Beyond (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:58:04 PM AEST
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I just loooooooooooooove a happy ending!
'specially when it's written in rhyme.

Jordan :o)

Re: Forever and Beyond (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:17:43 PM AEST
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nice ending
I'm glad you both are happy
love reading your work

Re: Forever and Beyond (User Rating: 1 )
by Lizard on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:29:16 PM AEST
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Hey Beanie, Lizard here
I really liked the poem. I hope that you continue writing.
well that's all for now!
Catch ya later my bestest best buddy pal friend
:)

Re: Forever and Beyond (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:46:41 AM AEST
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Beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy

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