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Pulled in so many directions
Its like my spirit is dorment
It seems I get no attention
Until my heart turned golden
By Gods good graces
To share this moment
with all colors and races
I am a warrior
In true uniform
As Jesus my savior
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Only One

Contributed by Hakiokusaken on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

My life is in torment
Pulled in so many directions
Its like my spirit is dorment
It seems I get no attention
Until my heart turned golden
By Gods good graces
To share this moment
with all colors and races
I am a warrior
In true uniform
As Jesus my savior
I come to inform

Copyright © Hakiokusaken ... [ 2004-08-07 16:40:49]
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Re: Only One (User Rating: 1 )
by Luka on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM AEST
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I am not a relgious person at all, infact most of the time i doubt that there really is even a higher power, but after reading this poem it makes you think. what if god is really there? anyway i feel the length of a poem dosent mean anything its the poiny your trying to get across you got your point across in this short poem and thats all you need to do good job 4 stars

Re: Only One (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:06:05 AM AEST
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I too am not a religious person but you have done a fine job on this poem. Keep up the good work

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