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Array ( [sid] => 59264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everlasting Feelings Of Numbness [time] => 2004-08-07 14:48:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => wrong doing and sin is all that you know
but in the end what have you got left to show
a bitter side, or shameful pride
your heart decreases making your hate grow

you've lied and cheated since ten years old
are you saying being hated makes you bold
no one likes you, friendships are through
dead are your eyes your shoulders cold

once you retire to be an old man
will you still not accept a helping hand
throw out your life, with pain and strife
hiding emotions as best as you can

the lies that you've lived all of these years
the times all alone you've held back the tears
we all need love, love from above
so let go all the hate and be rid of your fears

you hated the world when all they did was love you
acting like your tough and thinking your real to
its not to late, admit your fake
let your endless cycle of dead emotions be through [comments] => 1 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 48 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Everlasting Feelings Of Numbness

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:48:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

wrong doing and sin is all that you know
but in the end what have you got left to show
a bitter side, or shameful pride
your heart decreases making your hate grow

you've lied and cheated since ten years old
are you saying being hated makes you bold
no one likes you, friendships are through
dead are your eyes your shoulders cold

once you retire to be an old man
will you still not accept a helping hand
throw out your life, with pain and strife
hiding emotions as best as you can

the lies that you've lived all of these years
the times all alone you've held back the tears
we all need love, love from above
so let go all the hate and be rid of your fears

you hated the world when all they did was love you
acting like your tough and thinking your real to
its not to late, admit your fake
let your endless cycle of dead emotions be through

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2004-08-07 14:48:36]
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Re: Everlasting Feelings Of Numbness (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:05:18 PM AEST
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I know too many people like that....nice write.
Katie

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