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Array ( [sid] => 59241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Her Illusion [time] => 2004-08-07 09:31:27 [hometext] => Does It Happen [bodytext] => August Seventh Two Thousand Four
it almost feels like, I have been here before
In one of my dreams, a few years back
I stopped in more than one, unfamiliar shack

I tried on lots of shoes , almost for one hour
The person helping me, got very sour
I couldn't make up my mind, whatever I was shown
Nothing seem right, like from the unknown

When I approached this store, in two thousand four
I knew I had been here, that was for sure
What to do next, should I go in again
will the same lady be there, and rememeber me when

When she had waited on me, or was it really a dream
and it would not matter, or would she just scream
Get out, get out, you are not welcome here
once was enough, so I ran out in fear

When did this happen, my mind is a blank
did I do something terrible, or is it a prank
Please someone help me, get over this joke
Like this never happened, and she never spoke

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Her Illusion

Contributed by Bruce on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

August Seventh Two Thousand Four
it almost feels like, I have been here before
In one of my dreams, a few years back
I stopped in more than one, unfamiliar shack

I tried on lots of shoes , almost for one hour
The person helping me, got very sour
I couldn't make up my mind, whatever I was shown
Nothing seem right, like from the unknown

When I approached this store, in two thousand four
I knew I had been here, that was for sure
What to do next, should I go in again
will the same lady be there, and rememeber me when

When she had waited on me, or was it really a dream
and it would not matter, or would she just scream
Get out, get out, you are not welcome here
once was enough, so I ran out in fear

When did this happen, my mind is a blank
did I do something terrible, or is it a prank
Please someone help me, get over this joke
Like this never happened, and she never spoke

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-08-07 09:31:27]
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Re: Her Illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:13:36 PM AEST
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I like it please write more like this when you get a chance.

Re: Her Illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:45:26 PM AEST
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I really like this piece. sometimes this happens to me too. i hope you get to write some more.

love forever
stew

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