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Array ( [sid] => 59223 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One More Chance [time] => 2004-08-07 03:25:41 [hometext] => Have you ever lied to someone you loved and regretted it all? Did they break up with you because you lied an now you want them back? Heres a poem for you then. [bodytext] => I woke up late because I saw your face
and I knew that I was in love with you
I knew I screwed it all up when I lied
but now I know stuff I never knew

No matter what the reason was
or what the reason could be
I hurt you when I shouldnt of
so we broke up because of me

I am sorry babe for all the pain
and sorry for all the grief
Jus tell me what I could do
and change all those beliefs

I want you back dont you see
I learned the lessons of this pain
Just give me one last chance to prove
that without you it isnt the same [comments] => 6 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 50 [informant] => BekahLynnSmith [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

One More Chance

Contributed by BekahLynnSmith on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I woke up late because I saw your face
and I knew that I was in love with you
I knew I screwed it all up when I lied
but now I know stuff I never knew

No matter what the reason was
or what the reason could be
I hurt you when I shouldnt of
so we broke up because of me

I am sorry babe for all the pain
and sorry for all the grief
Jus tell me what I could do
and change all those beliefs

I want you back dont you see
I learned the lessons of this pain
Just give me one last chance to prove
that without you it isnt the same

Copyright © BekahLynnSmith ... [ 2004-08-07 03:25:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:31:22 AM AEST
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great write. Ive never been in that situation, but i
have felt those feelings. Truly you have a gift.

Dizza

Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:34:19 AM AEST
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Well done.. venkat

Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:24:13 AM AEST
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I thought your poem was perfect and radiated your inner most thoughts. Very well done.

I haven't been in that exact situation you described but I have been thru a break up. Using hindsight, if I had put my pride aside and accepted his apology it would have sent my life on a different path. No matter how hard he tried I could never allow myself to take him back. I learned lessons and the hard way is not preferrable anymore.

Maybe it is because i'm getting to old to run into brick walls all the time... LOL

Excellent poem.

Kie

Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:26:41 AM AEST
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I have never been through a break-up before but you have described the heartache of it very vividly and emotionally. Good on you, and great poem ;)

Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:27:39 PM AEST
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I can't say that I have, but you have written this so well... Hope things work out.....
Jenni

Re: One More Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:36:01 AM AEST
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Awesome read, you have a great talent, and I will be watching for more from you.

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