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Array ( [sid] => 59199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Young Bride [time] => 2004-08-06 23:26:34 [hometext] => My friend Joanna just got married, opn Aug 6, 04 and this poem was written from how she looked as she went down the aisle. To Mark and Joanna [bodytext] => Young woman
Billowed in white
Floating to her new life
From beneath the thin white gauze
Her red hair glows in the light
Ans the joy reflects from her face
Her eyes glittering brown
Are on him alone
The one she is being given to
And in them he drowns in
Her hopes
her innocence
Her dreams
Her love
all reflected
On this face
One knows this bride
Though afraid
Is strong inside
Firm in the love of the Lord
Who created her
and in the love of the one
who held out his hand
and promised to protect
always.
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Young Bride

Contributed by faith_my_eyes on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:26:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Young woman
Billowed in white
Floating to her new life
From beneath the thin white gauze
Her red hair glows in the light
Ans the joy reflects from her face
Her eyes glittering brown
Are on him alone
The one she is being given to
And in them he drowns in
Her hopes
her innocence
Her dreams
Her love
all reflected
On this face
One knows this bride
Though afraid
Is strong inside
Firm in the love of the Lord
Who created her
and in the love of the one
who held out his hand
and promised to protect
always.

Copyright © faith_my_eyes ... [ 2004-08-06 23:26:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 12:17:12 AM AEST
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I consider weddings to be doorstep moments. Those moments in your life where your eyes, heart & mind are privileged to view an event that is precious, elegant and time pauses for those happy moments.

White understated elegance, vows, the procession that leads to the princess who outshines the atmosphere is an event that warms my heart.

I smile, I cry and I send prayers for happily ever after.

Wonderful poem.

Kie

Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 12:18:35 AM AEST
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Beautiful picture. This is very nice work, Emily my friend.

Andrew

Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 04:09:37 PM AEST
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What a wonderful tribute!
Stitch

Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:46:10 PM AEST
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I like the feeling of committment I got from reading this poem. I liked the part when you said,
Her hopes
her innocence
Her dreams
Her love

That was a good poem. I liked the flow, too. Well done, Emily. God bless,
~Carrie~

Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 10:10:53 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. You've got a gift, Em. It's a beautiful poem.
Take care.
David

Re: Young Bride (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 09:48:51 AM AEST
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Nicely done
Now they are one
I like your choice of
words

Sinned

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