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Array ( [sid] => 5914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hurting [time] => 2002-10-30 11:00:00 [hometext] => its not really angry but only place i could think to stick it in. Please read and comment [bodytext] => People told me that I would have to watch my back with you
They told me that when I had my back turned you would stab a knife into it
I never wanted to believe them
He is just hurting I told them
When you first hurt me I just told myself he is just hurting
He’s just hurting he doesn’t know what he is doing
All the pain and worry that he causes me
He is just hurting
Getting out anger that he doesn’t know how to control
I stood up for you countless times
Putting my friendship with others on the line
I was always there for you or so I thought
I fought for you when no one else did
When no one else was there I was lending an ear

Now you’re trying so hard at pushing me away
And it is ripping me apart
I keep trying to reach out to you
But you push even harder
This time I am not going to fail a friend
I will press back
I will hold you even when you yell and scream and hit and bite
For deep down I don’t think you want to lose me
I can see it deep down in your eyes
I will stay strong I will fight for you
You may beat me down but I will get up again
I will not let you push me away
I will stay close to you
I will hold you when you cry

I love you and I know that you love me to
You are just confused
And hurting
Or is that just my heart making up excuses for you hurting me
I don’t want to lose you
I will not lose you
I refuse to give up on you
I love you too much to let you go
Please listen to my plea
I can’t bear to lose you
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Hurting

Contributed by lil_angel on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



People told me that I would have to watch my back with you
They told me that when I had my back turned you would stab a knife into it
I never wanted to believe them
He is just hurting I told them
When you first hurt me I just told myself he is just hurting
He’s just hurting he doesn’t know what he is doing
All the pain and worry that he causes me
He is just hurting
Getting out anger that he doesn’t know how to control
I stood up for you countless times
Putting my friendship with others on the line
I was always there for you or so I thought
I fought for you when no one else did
When no one else was there I was lending an ear

Now you’re trying so hard at pushing me away
And it is ripping me apart
I keep trying to reach out to you
But you push even harder
This time I am not going to fail a friend
I will press back
I will hold you even when you yell and scream and hit and bite
For deep down I don’t think you want to lose me
I can see it deep down in your eyes
I will stay strong I will fight for you
You may beat me down but I will get up again
I will not let you push me away
I will stay close to you
I will hold you when you cry

I love you and I know that you love me to
You are just confused
And hurting
Or is that just my heart making up excuses for you hurting me
I don’t want to lose you
I will not lose you
I refuse to give up on you
I love you too much to let you go
Please listen to my plea
I can’t bear to lose you




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Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:13:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully written
but be careful how much
you give, that you dont end
up being used and abused
and so drained in the end
that you have no strength
to give anything to anyone
else in your life, I have been
down this road. Be careful
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:33:42 AM AEST
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Lovely poem...and I tend to agree with OreO..
Jenni


Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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HI,LIL-ANGEL
THIS IS VERY GOOD,KEEP IT UP.
R.C.


Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by rockshv on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:05:04 PM AEST
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i agree with oreo... and i also have been in a similar position ...
nice work


Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by capergirl_23 on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:44:42 AM AEST
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Nice poem. But I do agree with a few of the others. I have been down this road also. And sometimes the best thing to do is let go. Like the old saying goes. If it is meant to be they will come back to you. So stay strong, & stay safe.


Re: Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Fiona on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:43:13 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem, you sound like you are someone with a lot of strength and good character. All my love to you hun. *Fiona*




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