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[aid] => mick
[title] => IS DAN DEAD?
[time] => 2004-08-06 04:56:00
[hometext] => There's so much more I could put in this, but it's making me cry, so i've just finished it here... I still haven't heard from Dan. I think he's tried to kill him-sefl agin... *sob*
[bodytext] => I thought I understood suicide. I've tried it my-self enough times... I never thought Dan would leave my side. I never imagined he'd close his eyes! I never believed he'd try to die. That after what he gave me, He'd NEVER leave me dead inside...! So along comes Dan, In his talkative tone. Saying how, I'm never alone. He said he's here, And that he'll always be round. He said he cares for me. He picked me up off the ground. He gave me a warm hug, Which sent life through my bones. And then we snogged, And his strength made me grow... And so this "Shell Of A Loser", That I used to be, I suddenly wasn't! And instead I was happy!!! ... Next day I left the country, To go on a holiday. I had wanted to stay with Dan! But I didn't have a say!!! And he's had his problems, But I can't help him! We're so far apart! ... I just want to hug him! I've been away over a week now. And we've just lost touch. I don't understand how, I love Dan this much! I miss him every waking moment. Every second spare. I miss the way he used to hold me, But I miss him most 'coz he's not here! I wouldn't kill my-self, Because I held on to Dan. But when DAN's mind twists its self. DAN makes me so sad! DAN tried to kill him-self, Just over a week ago. DAN is all I have left. But still, he has suicidal blows! If DAN has killed him self, Then I just want to know. This insanier has hit me hard! Is he dead, OR HAS HE JUST OVER-DOSED? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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