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Array ( [sid] => 59089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Perfect World [time] => 2004-08-06 01:00:52 [hometext] => All of us have a perfect world that will last far beyond our death [bodytext] =>
I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where hunger does not exist
And flowers never cease to bloom
A world with endless grass mountains
And blues skies all the way

I’ve lives in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where everybody is something like human
Where lies break hearts
And smiles bring joy
Where walking barefoot in the beach is every girl’s dreams
And a woman’s anatomy is every boy’s fantasy

I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where I am of no use
And deceptions are all that one looks forward to
My world where hope is traded with sorrow
And sorrow traded with lies
With grief
With suicide
With death

I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world trapped in the nothingness of life
Of a life filled with nothing at all
A life that follows the trail to disaster
This is my perfect world
The world where you and I come from
We will live in it for many centuries
Or maybe until the end of time

This Is Our Perfect World [comments] => 3 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Witch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Perfect World

Contributed by Witch on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:00:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where hunger does not exist
And flowers never cease to bloom
A world with endless grass mountains
And blues skies all the way

I’ve lives in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where everybody is something like human
Where lies break hearts
And smiles bring joy
Where walking barefoot in the beach is every girl’s dreams
And a woman’s anatomy is every boy’s fantasy

I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world where I am of no use
And deceptions are all that one looks forward to
My world where hope is traded with sorrow
And sorrow traded with lies
With grief
With suicide
With death

I’ve lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
It’s my perfect world trapped in the nothingness of life
Of a life filled with nothing at all
A life that follows the trail to disaster
This is my perfect world
The world where you and I come from
We will live in it for many centuries
Or maybe until the end of time

This Is Our Perfect World

Copyright Â© Witch ... [ 2004-08-06 01:00:52]
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Re: My Perfect World (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:06:07 AM AEST
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interesting view.

Re: My Perfect World (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:48:13 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this, I love my own little world though it can;t block out everything...superb write.

Re: My Perfect World (User Rating: 1 )
by x_midnight_x on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:50:03 AM AEST
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awww i dont want it to be our perfect world..its just too awful to imagine and makes me feel unity and need a hug instead of another kick in the teeth for still surviving..i felt the grime and blackness without time..as i read on,i loved it you should send it out again i bet it will bring further comments once its unleashed,fantastic keep writing x

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