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Like a Thunderstorm
Contributed by
Stew
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:05:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love is like a thunderstorm
It bangs and clashes too
But sometimes love is like the rain
That falls gentle and true.
Thunderstorms have lightning
That lights up the sky
Just the way it lights up
Your charming and elegant eyes.
Lightning embraces the clouds
Who moves along its path
And pours down its rain
Like when we take a bath.
Love is like a thunderstorm
With wind that comes from faraway
It blows voice from afar
And carries our love away.
Copyright ©
Stew
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2004-08-05 23:05:36]
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Re: Like a Thunderstorm
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by waos on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:29:47 PM AEST
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| that's good, the best part is the very last line in my opinion, i think it rocks. good job writing, its a cool comparison i think. |
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Re: Like a Thunderstorm
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by inoc on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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great write!
I enjoy thunderstorms
and love in the air.. |
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Re: Like a Thunderstorm
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by pixie on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:17:50 AM AEST
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awww this is a wonderful and sweet poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Like a Thunderstorm
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by Bruce on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:28:45 PM AEST
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| another great write, i love the way you are writing xx |
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Re: Like a Thunderstorm
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 09:33:42 PM AEST
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| I love the simile. This was a great Poem! |
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