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Array ( [sid] => 58999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death [time] => 2004-08-05 11:05:39 [hometext] => Just some feelings I'm having now. Finally found a way to get them out. It's been hard to even write lately [bodytext] => I only wanted
To do it perfect
It's only left me
Feeling counterfiet

So many things
I was gonna change
Gonna be better
In so many ways

I wish back then,
I could've looked at me now
Small and broken,
Thought I'd figured it all out

So much has changed
In two years time
Lost all of the things
I thought were life

Now I need to glance ahead,
Be sure of what will come
During my next two trips
Around the sun

I am left searching
Eyes scared and confused
So fearfull of everything
I feel I'm set to lose

I feel like the World
Inside of me has died
But I'm doomed to live on
With a painted smile [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => _Raspberry_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Death

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:05:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I only wanted
To do it perfect
It's only left me
Feeling counterfiet

So many things
I was gonna change
Gonna be better
In so many ways

I wish back then,
I could've looked at me now
Small and broken,
Thought I'd figured it all out

So much has changed
In two years time
Lost all of the things
I thought were life

Now I need to glance ahead,
Be sure of what will come
During my next two trips
Around the sun

I am left searching
Eyes scared and confused
So fearfull of everything
I feel I'm set to lose

I feel like the World
Inside of me has died
But I'm doomed to live on
With a painted smile

Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-08-05 11:05:39]
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Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:12:16 AM AEST
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Awwww Raspberry I am sorry to hear that you are feeling like this, I can relate.... you have expressed this very well, a very good write,

pixie xx

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:17:17 AM AEST
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Very detailed in the way that your emotions are clearly visible to the reader, me, very nice write. Living as a shell of a human being isn't that fun, i know, i have been there too.

Poet

Re: Death (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:01:03 PM AEST
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pure feelings and you expressed them so well. awesome write.
Brynna

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