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Array ( [sid] => 58959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the sea [time] => 2004-08-05 05:18:15 [hometext] => i went to the coast one day and the life guards was out looking for a fishing boat that was lost at sea.. [bodytext] => why do i feel this sadness inside,
i look around me and see,
this wild wild sea..

the sorrow, and pain in the eyes of the people around me.
why are they here, why are they waiting..
the children, men and women what do they see,
standing and looking at this wild wild sea..

they stand for hours,
looking for what,
they see nothing,
the sea is barron,
this wild wild sea..

now i understand, the are waiting
waiting for their loved ones to return,
to return from this wild wild sea.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 31 [informant] => karrie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

the sea

Contributed by karrie on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:18:15 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

why do i feel this sadness inside,
i look around me and see,
this wild wild sea..

the sorrow, and pain in the eyes of the people around me.
why are they here, why are they waiting..
the children, men and women what do they see,
standing and looking at this wild wild sea..

they stand for hours,
looking for what,
they see nothing,
the sea is barron,
this wild wild sea..

now i understand, the are waiting
waiting for their loved ones to return,
to return from this wild wild sea..

Copyright © karrie ... [ 2004-08-05 05:18:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:22:12 AM AEST
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good work written with compassion for others.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC... the best poetry site on the net...
Lovely poem about something that is close to my heart-- the sea. I have seen this happen many a times because of the fact that I live just across the street from the ocean... and you have written about so vividly.....
Thank you..
Jenni

Re: the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:20:51 AM AEST
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Well done karen and welcome to the club, lol
I love poems about the sea, it is both beautiful and restless all at the same time

steve

Re: the sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST
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I love the sea. It holds a power over me, although I expect nothing from it, exept the words it gives me to write.
A very nice piece.
Well done, and welcome to YPDC, althou I see that I am a bit late for that.
Take care.
David

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