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Array ( [sid] => 58874 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Could Change The World [time] => 2004-08-04 12:35:21 [hometext] => from may 15, comments would be appreciative, constuctive critisism please [bodytext] => if i could change the world
it would be a better place
there'd be no poverty
depression, discrimination of a race
you and me
we could live together
in a place with no hate
grow old together
if i could change the world
i would have to change too
would you still have said you loved me
if you didnt know what im going through?
if you saw a random girl
walk down the street
saw blood on her arm
from her one last retreat
would you take her to the side
and exress your love?
or would you walk on by
with a push and a shove
if i could change the world
that decision would already be made
before she used the knife
she was already saved
if i could change the world
and make it a better place
no one could be sad
there'd be a smile on every face [comments] => 5 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 14 [informant] => anonymussme [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

If I Could Change The World

Contributed by anonymussme on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

if i could change the world
it would be a better place
there'd be no poverty
depression, discrimination of a race
you and me
we could live together
in a place with no hate
grow old together
if i could change the world
i would have to change too
would you still have said you loved me
if you didnt know what im going through?
if you saw a random girl
walk down the street
saw blood on her arm
from her one last retreat
would you take her to the side
and exress your love?
or would you walk on by
with a push and a shove
if i could change the world
that decision would already be made
before she used the knife
she was already saved
if i could change the world
and make it a better place
no one could be sad
there'd be a smile on every face

Copyright © anonymussme ... [ 2004-08-04 12:35:21]
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Re: If I Could Change The World (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:37:46 PM AEST
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Honestly, there is no constructive critisism here. What a gorgeous poem. And I wish that same thing. thankyou for posting this.

Kimberly :)

Re: If I Could Change The World (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:47:05 PM AEST
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Very heart felt poem here........wanting to help so many, but thats the rpoblem witht he world...we need more that want to help instead be in fear! Excellent!

Re: If I Could Change The World (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:48:19 PM AEST
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what everybody in there right mind that lives on the planet Earth could ever wish for.....

i just hope one day something like this will happen.

may Isis bless you child..

blessed be!
Sirena

Re: If I Could Change The World (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:04:23 PM AEST
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Holy **** I love this poem so much. It spoke out so well and it flowed magnificently. This poem was simply amazing. Thank you for sharing.

Heartfilledblood

Re: If I Could Change The World (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:07:40 PM AEST
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this is really good. very good intentions would come if u could change the world. very descriptive. good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~

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