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Array ( [sid] => 58871 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Demon, this pain [time] => 2004-08-04 12:16:14 [hometext] => I must of redid this poem a hundred times before I thought it was good. I still think in needs works so if you could help me out leave a comments. [bodytext] => This pain inside is like a demon,
Always haunting, always hurting me.
I know nothing can kill it,
I know nothing can hurt it.

Since this demon has entered me,
I've been searching for a hero,
To come and save me.
Someone strong and brave.

I've come to realize now,
That there is no hero, there's only me.
I need to be my own hero,
No ones going to save me.

I don't know if I'm strong enough,
To vanquish this demon.
How do you know
If your strong enough?

I know this demon is very strong,
I know I have a lot of pain inside.
I know that everyday the demon inside grows stronger,
More powerful,
More hurtful.

I want it to all go away,
I'm going to have to make it.
I'm going to have to be strong enough,
Even if I'm not. [comments] => 12 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 61 [informant] => badboyzlover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

This Demon, this pain

Contributed by badboyzlover on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:16:14 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

This pain inside is like a demon,
Always haunting, always hurting me.
I know nothing can kill it,
I know nothing can hurt it.

Since this demon has entered me,
I've been searching for a hero,
To come and save me.
Someone strong and brave.

I've come to realize now,
That there is no hero, there's only me.
I need to be my own hero,
No ones going to save me.

I don't know if I'm strong enough,
To vanquish this demon.
How do you know
If your strong enough?

I know this demon is very strong,
I know I have a lot of pain inside.
I know that everyday the demon inside grows stronger,
More powerful,
More hurtful.

I want it to all go away,
I'm going to have to make it.
I'm going to have to be strong enough,
Even if I'm not.

Copyright © badboyzlover ... [ 2004-08-04 12:16:14]
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Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:21:07 PM AEST
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Great poem for your struggle within. Excellent write. Im glad you realized that it's you that can only stop it.

Kimberly :)

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TBessant on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:29:50 PM AEST
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Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TBessant on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:30:37 PM AEST
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Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TBessant on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:32:35 PM AEST
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Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TBessant on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:33:23 PM AEST
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Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:35:00 PM AEST
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Good write.............You do see the meaning of what needs to be done to make your life better. We all have demons, and we also........need to know that we have a beautiful and strong inner that can over power the bad and demon!

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TBessant on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:38:02 PM AEST
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Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:08:26 PM AEST
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this poem is good even if u think its not

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:08:48 PM AEST
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this poem is good even if u think its not

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:12:36 PM AEST
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this was so good

Brandy

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_Cloud_ on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 03:29:20 PM AEST
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That was a good write. And I dont think it needs any work at all.

Re: This Demon, this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by White_Raven on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:01:05 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Hope you can win the battle agianst this demon inside.

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