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Array ( [sid] => 58816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 2 seconds 2 late [time] => 2004-08-04 05:19:07 [hometext] => Umm i dont really like this but eh [bodytext] => Together forever till it all ends,
We壇 always be the best of friends,
But then I found I was living a lie,
And now I sit alone and cry,

I thought I meant the world,
But illusions cloud my vision,
You池e different from me, I知 just a girl,
And now my hearts decision,

Will I live this lie forever?
And think I知 part of the crowd,
Or take a knife and be clever,
And end this distortion out loud,

But then I begin to think,
Will they even know I知 gone?
With this thought I start to sink,
And with a final empathy I知 torn,

I took the blade and look to the skies,
With moonlight gleaming down,
I whipped the tears from my eyes,
And ended it without a sound,

Bloodstained sheets will haunt your dreams,
For could have you changed my fate?
Is what you caused what it seems?,
How you came 2 seconds too late



[comments] => 6 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
2 seconds 2 late

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:19:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Together forever till it all ends,
We壇 always be the best of friends,
But then I found I was living a lie,
And now I sit alone and cry,

I thought I meant the world,
But illusions cloud my vision,
You池e different from me, I知 just a girl,
And now my hearts decision,

Will I live this lie forever?
And think I知 part of the crowd,
Or take a knife and be clever,
And end this distortion out loud,

But then I begin to think,
Will they even know I知 gone?
With this thought I start to sink,
And with a final empathy I知 torn,

I took the blade and look to the skies,
With moonlight gleaming down,
I whipped the tears from my eyes,
And ended it without a sound,

Bloodstained sheets will haunt your dreams,
For could have you changed my fate?
Is what you caused what it seems?,
How you came 2 seconds too late







Copyright ツゥ corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-08-04 05:19:07]
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:35:22 AM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:41:42 AM AEST
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very sad and moving, great poem,

pixie xx


Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:03:16 AM AEST
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ur a real good writter loz


Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:41:28 AM AEST
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Very sad sentiments but a great write none the less. You have good talent.

Hope all is not so gray and the sun comes out to brighthen up your day!

Corinna


Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:21:37 AM AEST
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WOW all that emotion
goes to show.....
each second counts hey?


Re: 2 seconds 2 late (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:47:49 PM AEST
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another excellent piece!
it's amazing!




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