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Array ( [sid] => 58733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Redefined Silence [time] => 2004-08-03 15:14:50 [hometext] => (I wrote this poem after cutting myself.) [bodytext] => Redefined Silence

Pieces of the untraced heart
Redefined with every down fall
Contemplating the pain of life
And the happiness of suicide
Unknown desperation soaring
Through the punctured vein.

Seperation of the guilty mind
Forget what was real and
Remember the desire for what was wasnt.
The love for the decomposing silence
Holding together with the stitches of pain
Pieced together not with sincerity but regret
Soaking the ashes of passion and desire with tears. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 61 [informant] => dopetherapy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Redefined Silence

Contributed by dopetherapy on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Redefined Silence

Pieces of the untraced heart
Redefined with every down fall
Contemplating the pain of life
And the happiness of suicide
Unknown desperation soaring
Through the punctured vein.

Seperation of the guilty mind
Forget what was real and
Remember the desire for what was wasnt.
The love for the decomposing silence
Holding together with the stitches of pain
Pieced together not with sincerity but regret
Soaking the ashes of passion and desire with tears.




Copyright © dopetherapy ... [ 2004-08-03 15:14:50]
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Re: Redefined Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:58:19 PM AEST
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A mesmorizing poem and also sad. Please try not to hurt yourself over the troubles of this world. Believe me your not alone in how your feeling, but you also need to know that things will eventually get better for you if you let them.
take care.


Kimberly :)


Re: Redefined Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:15:03 PM AEST
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fantastic write with much emotion. everything i have to say on this issue youve probably heard or dont believe, so there is nothing else to say...


Re: Redefined Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:54:40 PM AEST
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Somewhere along the way I learnt that so many people cut themselves in one way or another. Some with a blade, some with a tounge, in my case, 'twere my thoughts. I cherished the freedom when I stopped.

Jordan xxx




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