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Array ( [sid] => 58714 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost and Alone [time] => 2004-08-03 12:42:39 [hometext] => I wrote this a few nights ago about my friends fighting with each other. It seems that no matter what I do I'm always put in the middle, and I don't know who they are anymore... Read the poem and tell me if it's good or not, ok? [bodytext] => I've shed way too many tears
For people that do not exist.
Every night I cry
And I wonder why this is.

I loved them more than I loved myself.
They helped keep away the pain.
But now all I feel is the emptiness
And the harsh beat of eternal rain.

I was never thought of as emotional,
I was never thought the one to cry.
But now it seems thats all I do,
And I can't help but wonder why.

Now all I feel is an empty void
Deep inside my soul.
All I want at this moment
Is the feeling of being whole.

I will always have the memories
Imprinted in my heart,
And maybe someday that will be enough
To help format a fresh start. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 16 [informant] => CBlake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Lost and Alone

Contributed by CBlake on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:42:39 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I've shed way too many tears
For people that do not exist.
Every night I cry
And I wonder why this is.

I loved them more than I loved myself.
They helped keep away the pain.
But now all I feel is the emptiness
And the harsh beat of eternal rain.

I was never thought of as emotional,
I was never thought the one to cry.
But now it seems thats all I do,
And I can't help but wonder why.

Now all I feel is an empty void
Deep inside my soul.
All I want at this moment
Is the feeling of being whole.

I will always have the memories
Imprinted in my heart,
And maybe someday that will be enough
To help format a fresh start.

Copyright © CBlake ... [ 2004-08-03 12:42:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost and Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:46:41 PM AEST
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really well written and easily relatable. keep it up!

Re: Lost and Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:48:49 PM AEST
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This is a good write. The flow is good and the words show your emotions well. I hope things get better soon! Thanks for sharing.

Carol

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