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[aid] => mick
[title] => I Look Into Your Eyes
[time] => 2004-08-03 12:31:35
[hometext] => This is my second poem about the same girl that i cannot have, please, all comments greatly appreciated.
[bodytext] => “I look into your eyes”
I look into your eyes while we speak,
I know I’ll remember this for the rest of the week.
For you mean more to me than anything in this world
I lay in bed at night, thinking, dreaming, balled up and curled.
All this time you know not of my secret desire,
To hold your hand and take a walk is what I like to conspire.
Your beautiful smile and your gorgeous brown hair,
To look away from these I choose not to dare.
When I feel sad, down, or blue,
I simply have to think of you.
This will bring a smile to my face,
It brings it there on a rather quick pace.
I love the way you walk,
I love to hear you talk.
Your voice is so good and pure,
And forever this I shall endure.
For you know not of my love for you,
To tell you this is all I want to do.
But I’m afraid of what you might say,
So I tell myself, maybe some other day.
Maybe today you will speak to me,
And that will give me a sense of glee,
For then perhaps you will see,
How much you truly mean to me.
I will wait forever, if that’s what I need,
You have planted in my heart your loving seed.
I will care for you always, and that’s what is true,
Hopefully one day you will know that I love you.
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 326
[topic] => 33
[informant] => Kevin
[notes] =>
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SecretLove
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I Look Into Your Eyes
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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“I look into your eyes”
I look into your eyes while we speak,
I know I’ll remember this for the rest of the week.
For you mean more to me than anything in this world
I lay in bed at night, thinking, dreaming, balled up and curled.
All this time you know not of my secret desire,
To hold your hand and take a walk is what I like to conspire.
Your beautiful smile and your gorgeous brown hair,
To look away from these I choose not to dare.
When I feel sad, down, or blue,
I simply have to think of you.
This will bring a smile to my face,
It brings it there on a rather quick pace.
I love the way you walk,
I love to hear you talk.
Your voice is so good and pure,
And forever this I shall endure.
For you know not of my love for you,
To tell you this is all I want to do.
But I’m afraid of what you might say,
So I tell myself, maybe some other day.
Maybe today you will speak to me,
And that will give me a sense of glee,
For then perhaps you will see,
How much you truly mean to me.
I will wait forever, if that’s what I need,
You have planted in my heart your loving seed.
I will care for you always, and that’s what is true,
Hopefully one day you will know that I love you.
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2004-08-03 12:31:35]
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by badboyzlover on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:39:00 PM AEST
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| This is a great write. If you really love this girl tho you should tell her. Maybe she feels the same for you. |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:39:02 PM AEST
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Kevin, this is beautiful and so endearing... You should show it to her...let her know how you feel.....
Best of luck!!
Jenni |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:39:41 PM AEST
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| Whew! Wouldn't be surprised if she came running to you. Best of luck! |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:45:12 PM AEST
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| This is a lesson that I have learned the hard way...The longer you wait to tell her how you feel. Thats one less chance that you have... I wouldnt be surprised if she feel the same way you do but she is waiting for you to tell her first..I wish you the best of luck. Good writting. |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by anonymussme on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:56:54 PM AEST
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| an awsome way to tell her would be to give her this poem. its a great poem and it expresses your feelings for her. do it soon, she's probably waiting.... |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:17:58 PM AEST
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I have been on the other side of this. By the time the guy told me how he felt I only thought of him as a brotherish type friend.
Had he in the beginning given me a clue that he was falling for me or liked me there would have been a chance.
Ask yourself what you have to lose by telling her or showing her this? You are already aching inside.
I'm sending good wishes your way..
Kie |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:41:17 PM AEST
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wonderful write Kevin, maybe you should take this poem to her and show her just how you feel, dont leave it too lte or you may regret it for the rest of your life *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Kevin on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:41:38 PM AEST
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| I took your guys' advice and e-mailed the poem to her, not this one, but another one called "Don't know what to say" i've posted it on this site aswell. Anyway, I'm still waiting to see if she got it and whether she liked it, but I took the chance, hopefully things will work out for the best... |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Kevin on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:25:08 PM AEST
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anyway, i decided not to give it to her, it'll just create problems, but whatever, just thought i'd let anyone who cares know.
-Kevin |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by N0body on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 06:23:39 PM AEST
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| ......breath taking...and amazing... |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Silent_Storm on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:52:13 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem! I really like it! It's amazing. I wouldn't be surprised if this girl has feelings for you as well. Sometimes in life you have to take a risk. best of luck! |
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Re: I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 02:10:10 PM AEST
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| Wow, very sweet! You really like this girl. I hope you DO get her! Great job!! |
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