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Array ( [sid] => 58656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unrequited [time] => 2004-08-03 02:23:20 [hometext] => Ouch.....I bleed........Really. [bodytext] => Twist of knife, in a turn of time,
the buring knife, abalates my insides,
feelings are rent, as her words crawl within,
and the reality draws, of my foolish immortal sin
you see for those months, I really did care,
for those days, just to mouth words to her were all I could dare,
for fear of rejection, was all I could keep hold,
and here merest touch, presence, was more then enough for me to behold,
then the truth came, staggering in one day,
a reality was lost, and in it's place was I found a play,
a dance of death, an emotional shudder,
the immolation of my soul, the loss of my emotional rudder,
I twist and turn on endless waves, without her I am lost,
but without her, I am saved. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => fredlost [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Unrequited

Contributed by fredlost on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:23:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Twist of knife, in a turn of time,
the buring knife, abalates my insides,
feelings are rent, as her words crawl within,
and the reality draws, of my foolish immortal sin
you see for those months, I really did care,
for those days, just to mouth words to her were all I could dare,
for fear of rejection, was all I could keep hold,
and here merest touch, presence, was more then enough for me to behold,
then the truth came, staggering in one day,
a reality was lost, and in it's place was I found a play,
a dance of death, an emotional shudder,
the immolation of my soul, the loss of my emotional rudder,
I twist and turn on endless waves, without her I am lost,
but without her, I am saved.

Copyright © fredlost ... [ 2004-08-03 02:23:20]
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Re: Unrequited (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:30:01 AM AEST
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Very nice piece. At least you have the ability to admit how you feel in such a hard time. take care

Kimberly :)

Re: Unrequited (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:22:23 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....
Lovely write.... I would however, love to know the meaning of: "Abalates" and Immolation" then maybe I could appreciate your poem more...
Jenni

Re: Unrequited (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:22:24 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....
Lovely write.... I would however, love to know the meaning of: "Abalates" and Immolation" then maybe I could appreciate your poem more...
Jenni

Re: Unrequited (User Rating: 1 )
by Sophie_Taylor on Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 10:26:30 PM AEST
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UM...I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY REALLY
ITS A GREAT POEM!! A FEW WORDS THAT I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT THEY MEAN
BUT...YEAH OK WRITE!!
SOPHIE XOXO

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