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Array ( [sid] => 58649 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling Out [time] => 2004-08-03 01:16:36 [hometext] => I like the irony of calling this a "Friendship Poem", but this is just how I feel when my friends arent really being friends at all [bodytext] => Take it back
Throw it all away
You no longer want to come out
Come out and play

I call you up
You say you'll call back
When that never happens
Its like a kick to the sack

You act like your my friend
You act like you care
Your acting sucks
Your never there

You could call
Or you could even page
But you can't even act
When your not on the stage

So don't try to fool me
Don't feed me this bull
Its starting to tire me
Its getting so dull

So pull out your head
Pull it from your rear
Because Im not crying
Not shedding a tear

Its your life there
You can do what you want
But your lack of friends
Is not somthing to flaunt

So if you dont care
If you dont mind
Dont even bother
To take the time

Just leave right now
And never turn back
Because its not gana be me
To help you get back on track [comments] => 2 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 16 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Falling Out

Contributed by kyletycz on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Take it back
Throw it all away
You no longer want to come out
Come out and play

I call you up
You say you'll call back
When that never happens
Its like a kick to the sack

You act like your my friend
You act like you care
Your acting sucks
Your never there

You could call
Or you could even page
But you can't even act
When your not on the stage

So don't try to fool me
Don't feed me this bull
Its starting to tire me
Its getting so dull

So pull out your head
Pull it from your rear
Because Im not crying
Not shedding a tear

Its your life there
You can do what you want
But your lack of friends
Is not somthing to flaunt

So if you dont care
If you dont mind
Dont even bother
To take the time

Just leave right now
And never turn back
Because its not gana be me
To help you get back on track

Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-08-03 01:16:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Falling Out (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:26:43 AM AEST
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Verry good work of art here.
It's really cool.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Falling Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Froggy on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:52:50 AM AEST
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I can seriously relate to it....good write

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