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Array ( [sid] => 58641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Left Me [time] => 2004-08-02 23:52:27 [hometext] => I wrote this after my bf and i broke up....please comment....it means alot [bodytext] => I watch you as you wave goodbye
Now I really begin to cry
You left me here, on my own
I wish that I had only known

You hurt me so bad
It didn’t even make you sad
I thought you cared about me
But now I really see

That I meant nothing to you
There was nothing I wouldn’t do
I would have lost my blood
Now my tears begin to flood

I can’t believe the pain I feel
My insides are beginning to peel
Falling apart from the inside out
You have filled me with so much doubt

Now I don’t trust anyone
This pain will never be undone
You left me wounded and all alone
I’ve now gone into a different zone

I can’t concentrate anymore
I’m now more depressed then ever before
I don’t think I will ever heal
Oh, I wish this pain, you could feel

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Left Me

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:52:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I watch you as you wave goodbye
Now I really begin to cry
You left me here, on my own
I wish that I had only known

You hurt me so bad
It didn’t even make you sad
I thought you cared about me
But now I really see

That I meant nothing to you
There was nothing I wouldn’t do
I would have lost my blood
Now my tears begin to flood

I can’t believe the pain I feel
My insides are beginning to peel
Falling apart from the inside out
You have filled me with so much doubt

Now I don’t trust anyone
This pain will never be undone
You left me wounded and all alone
I’ve now gone into a different zone

I can’t concentrate anymore
I’m now more depressed then ever before
I don’t think I will ever heal
Oh, I wish this pain, you could feel

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-02 23:52:27]
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Re: Left Me (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:55:39 PM AEST
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great poem.
hope you feel better soon.

Re: Left Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:00:03 AM AEST
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I suppose no words can really make you immediately feel better, but then again it's not natural to recuperate from such an ordeal so quickly. But only know that you mean a lot to someone, and that your pain will find an end in one of your experiences.

Lovely piece, I hope you keep sharing

Re: Left Me (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:20:12 AM AEST
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I know the heartbreak feeling. It is so painful . This was a very good poem. Keep it up. I hope all goes well and in time you can look back at this time in your life and think " it just made me a better and stronger person."

Re: Left Me (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:21:06 AM AEST
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hey, dont wory about it bud, just dont do like a friend of mine did when she broke up with her boyfriend, and she was heartbroken for about 3 days, then she started becoming a major slut and hitting on anything that looks like a guy, thats not a good thing when that happens, but back to the ranch, nice poem, i liked it alot..... l8r...

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