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When I hear the last hour chime
I’ll slip into a constant dream
I know I won’t be seeing a golden beam

But that doesn’t matter much to me
I just don’t care, you see
Heaven or hell it all seems the same
It’s like life is just one big game

The question is how will I do it
Cut my wrist with just one slit
Just take one shot to the head
Hang myself over my bed

I guess it doesn’t really matter
No matter what my life will shatter
I don’t really think anyone will care
It doesn’t really seem all that fair

But now I’ll say my last goodbyes
As you look into my lifeless eyes
Remember that this was my choice
I hope now you can hear my voice
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

This Time

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:30:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I think I’ll just let go this time
When I hear the last hour chime
I’ll slip into a constant dream
I know I won’t be seeing a golden beam

But that doesn’t matter much to me
I just don’t care, you see
Heaven or hell it all seems the same
It’s like life is just one big game

The question is how will I do it
Cut my wrist with just one slit
Just take one shot to the head
Hang myself over my bed

I guess it doesn’t really matter
No matter what my life will shatter
I don’t really think anyone will care
It doesn’t really seem all that fair

But now I’ll say my last goodbyes
As you look into my lifeless eyes
Remember that this was my choice
I hope now you can hear my voice

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-02 23:30:33]
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Re: This Time (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:13:54 AM AEST
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this is a totally awsome poem and as a fan of your poetry i'd like to say i'd miss you and i hope you dont do it

Re: This Time (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:48:42 AM AEST
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This is a great poem for it shows emotion so well. I hope this is something you are not planing on doing cause i have read a lot of your poetry and you have talent. It would be a shame for it to go to waste.

sMiLe!!!!!!!!!!

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