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Array ( [sid] => 58612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tweety.....................You know [time] => 2004-08-02 21:07:06 [hometext] => More and More I can see..............for one who wants and needs! [bodytext] => Looky looky what, I see
I have found, love, and you and me!
Seems we feel what most should do
But we wish we had more to do

The moon, the stars and all above
Its what will keep and all our love
WE talk and wishe and want so much
But will it work , by just keeping in touch?!

I know I want the life we dream of
But will it happen , or tis a screaming

To see the face , who I have long to see
Will make the one who breaks the glee

All the glow , and all the flow
Makes one heart knows knows they are whole

Keep dreaming all the dreams
For one who does will be the seen!

Ok I was in a honest mood.......and had to leave all to the love and bleed! Please comment~! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Tweety.....................You know

Contributed by brew on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 09:07:06 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Looky looky what, I see
I have found, love, and you and me!
Seems we feel what most should do
But we wish we had more to do

The moon, the stars and all above
Its what will keep and all our love
WE talk and wishe and want so much
But will it work , by just keeping in touch?!

I know I want the life we dream of
But will it happen , or tis a screaming

To see the face , who I have long to see
Will make the one who breaks the glee

All the glow , and all the flow
Makes one heart knows knows they are whole

Keep dreaming all the dreams
For one who does will be the seen!

Ok I was in a honest mood.......and had to leave all to the love and bleed! Please comment~!

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-08-02 21:07:06]
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Re: Tweety.....................You know (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:51:08 AM AEST
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A smile inside, a happy thought, a moment locked in time, a wish a prayer a dream set deep, locked into a stare. Lingers in a time of beauty and rhyme, a world so far away, yet near. So bleeds a heart of wounded soul, pierced deep not with pain, but of memories of sweetness and dreams of life, for a brief time to refrain. So catch the breath, strength to restore, life to begin again.....built opon said once upon a time......in a far off place, where magic was living in a pond.

Re: Tweety.....................You know (User Rating: 1 )
by KarlaMarie on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 12:35:04 AM AEST
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I have to comend not only you but AspenGlow as well for brillantly written works. that flow right off each other... i enjoyed both

KarlaMarie

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