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But I've never felt so far from anyone in all my life
Your hand hits hard across my face
And I stare at you through my dying eyes
Don't worry, I didn't feel a thing
I've been immune to this for quite some time
You continue to think you're hurting me
I go out and act as if I'm alright
But I see the world through my dying eyes
You've done damage time cannot erase
But don't worry, dear
I don't feel a thing
I look at normal people, and they try to stare down into my soul
But they will never find the secrets that my dying eyes do hold
One day you will take this way too far
And as I bleed my dying eyes will see the world for one last time
That night, I'll die alone
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Through My Dying Eyes

Contributed by Katie2008 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:59:44 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I see you there, you are near me
But I've never felt so far from anyone in all my life
Your hand hits hard across my face
And I stare at you through my dying eyes
Don't worry, I didn't feel a thing
I've been immune to this for quite some time
You continue to think you're hurting me
I go out and act as if I'm alright
But I see the world through my dying eyes
You've done damage time cannot erase
But don't worry, dear
I don't feel a thing
I look at normal people, and they try to stare down into my soul
But they will never find the secrets that my dying eyes do hold
One day you will take this way too far
And as I bleed my dying eyes will see the world for one last time
That night, I'll die alone

Copyright © Katie2008 ... [ 2004-08-02 16:59:44]
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Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:16:12 PM AEST
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*speechless*.....sounds really familuar to me......i like this it was really good it says a lot about the person who wrote this which would be you lol but hope you're alright and keep up the good work!
Much love,
Shelbi

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:25:18 PM AEST
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nice write, its awsome how you capture the feeling and darkness of the situation at hand.....

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:34:27 PM AEST
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Great job. It takes a lot of courage to write something so painful and so personal, because I'm sure this is something in your life that you do not share with people you do not know. I encourage you to stay strong and to share your experience with people you trust because they will be the ones who can help you through this.

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:49:43 PM AEST
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wow....this is great...excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:38:14 AM AEST
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dam this is so dam sad, brings back memories of what my sister went through before I butted in, she didnt want me to interfere, but I couldnt stand to see her so bruised...even though she tried to hide...none of the family could, So I did unto him what she suffer almost every night...So my sister no longer talks to me, but then nor is she in pain anymore.
I dont know if this is about you or created, but either way, get away from the pain no-one deserves to suffer from that sort of torment every night no-one.
Awesome write so much feeling.

Sorry if I misturpreted the message in the poem.

Please try to take care.

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:12:37 PM AEST
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awww, i wish i could do something for u... u should stay over my house more often. ur welcome netime. i feel so bad for u. all three of u but u mostly. *smooches*

~Sara

Re: Through My Dying Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:50:35 PM AEST
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wow, the way you discribed everything inspires me alot.. if you wrote that based on your personal experiences then i must say whoever made you feel that way will pay i am sure.. wow

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