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Array ( [sid] => 58542 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => magic crystal [time] => 2004-08-02 13:48:06 [hometext] => pleaz read and comment. u dont' hav to but it would b much appreciated. tell me exactly what u think of it, pleaz. thanx [bodytext] => back through time
he flew so fast
an age of terrior
he ended up in at last

he was worried
you could see it in his face
he came here for a reason
to this long forgoten place.

and then in the middle
of a place of hollyness
was a crying child
and he remembered why he came

he was sent here by a wizard
a dragon as fierce as he
but was warned
so he took the safest path
the passage by the sea.

his mission was to save the child
or all hope would b lost.
the child was the future king
but the dragon looked so fierce
so a magic crystal he did bring.

the crystal made him into a horse
with radiant beauty
and uncatchable speed.
and he took the child to a place
where he would be safe
from any harmful thing
that would come to this long forgotten space.

then at night
while the child slept
he changed back to a dragon
then on a hunt he soon after went.

then as the days turned to weeks
and the weeks turned to months
and finally the weeks turned to years
the child soon became a man.

and on his eighteenth birthday
the wizard finally came
releved the dragon
and took the child into training
for he would soon become a very powerful king.

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magic crystal

Contributed by shorty_52 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:48:06 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

back through time
he flew so fast
an age of terrior
he ended up in at last

he was worried
you could see it in his face
he came here for a reason
to this long forgoten place.

and then in the middle
of a place of hollyness
was a crying child
and he remembered why he came

he was sent here by a wizard
a dragon as fierce as he
but was warned
so he took the safest path
the passage by the sea.

his mission was to save the child
or all hope would b lost.
the child was the future king
but the dragon looked so fierce
so a magic crystal he did bring.

the crystal made him into a horse
with radiant beauty
and uncatchable speed.
and he took the child to a place
where he would be safe
from any harmful thing
that would come to this long forgotten space.

then at night
while the child slept
he changed back to a dragon
then on a hunt he soon after went.

then as the days turned to weeks
and the weeks turned to months
and finally the weeks turned to years
the child soon became a man.

and on his eighteenth birthday
the wizard finally came
releved the dragon
and took the child into training
for he would soon become a very powerful king.

Copyright © shorty_52 ... [ 2004-08-02 13:48:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: magic crystal (User Rating: 1 )
by BlazeingHeart on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:04:54 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this peom keep 'em comin

Re: magic crystal (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 04:01:28 PM AEST
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This is a good poem for people who enjoy these type of stories. Personally, it has no significance to me, but still... a great write.

Re: magic crystal (User Rating: 1 )
by kassi124 on Friday, 29th October 2010 @ 12:35:00 AM AEST
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nicely done :)

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