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Array ( [sid] => 58521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => poem for Krista [time] => 2004-08-02 12:10:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => aug 6, 1993
The astral world of intentions
does a slow dance around my heart
reminding me of everyone i’ve ever
danced with,
to the never ending tune of
“It aint me babe”
the resonance of Laurie Andersons voice,
penetrates my body,
whispering
hey..is anybody home?
the magnitude of Patricia’s love for
mother meera
makes me wonder
who..oooo
is loving me ....
the pink of Krista’s heart
floods my soul with God,
while the universal lightshow simultaneously displays itself.
the elf of my mind
appears as if she understands,
as i spin off to territory i am compelled to remember.
recordings of linear time inculcate my destiny.
trails of trickster remains,
fortify the mirror,
while the glasscutter of truth is slicing the veils,
exposing me to eternal considerations.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 55 [informant] => toni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

poem for Krista

Contributed by toni on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:10:08 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

aug 6, 1993
The astral world of intentions
does a slow dance around my heart
reminding me of everyone i’ve ever
danced with,
to the never ending tune of
“It aint me babe”
the resonance of Laurie Andersons voice,
penetrates my body,
whispering
hey..is anybody home?
the magnitude of Patricia’s love for
mother meera
makes me wonder
who..oooo
is loving me ....
the pink of Krista’s heart
floods my soul with God,
while the universal lightshow simultaneously displays itself.
the elf of my mind
appears as if she understands,
as i spin off to territory i am compelled to remember.
recordings of linear time inculcate my destiny.
trails of trickster remains,
fortify the mirror,
while the glasscutter of truth is slicing the veils,
exposing me to eternal considerations.

Copyright Â© toni ... [ 2004-08-02 12:10:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: poem for Krista (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:22:08 PM AEST
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Oh WOW!

I believe this is the first poem I have read of yours and I was ecstatic, for you do have a way with words.

This is a GREAT poem.

The way you wrote this is a style so unique that you are going to do great here!

Kie

Re: poem for Krista (User Rating: 1 )
by 03614 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:44:25 PM AEST
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nice poem, thanks for sharing

It's a really beautiful poem, an amazing one!

Re: poem for Krista (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:29:25 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece, well done........

Re: poem for Krista (User Rating: 1 )
by jeannoh on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 03:25:26 PM AEST
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I like the way you use your words

very nice poem
keep writing

Jeannoh

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