Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 18:20:26 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 58500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Celebrating the Sabbath [time] => 2004-08-02 07:22:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sunday afternoon the rain had stopped.

The inanimate bodies of the faithful
that had been strewn about the house
like piles of dirty laundry on sofas,
chairs and on beds upstairs, earlier
that morning had arisen. Lost souls
in search of new life, wobble
around half-awake and hung over.

It is the resurrection of the party.

A hodgepodge of hogs are parked
in the driveway and on the lawn,
under tarps and blankets or just plain wet.
One chromed Harley panhead,
a holy icon, with ape hanger handlebars
and a red flamed glossy black
fat bob gas tank, is sheltered
on the porch, beneath the eaves,
high and dry above the mud and muck.

Angel wanna bees and other Outrageous
* huddle around the boob
tube in the living room, watching
Sunday Services. American Football,
a Spaghetti Western with stale beer, left
over pretzels and soggy potato chips.

The Cowboys are getting scalped
by the Redskins.

Outside in the backyard, the beer kegs
are empty dead soldiers lying
in the mud. Bud in the can from the local
7-11 now provides salvation.

Friend of the Devil blasts from a boom
box, while three girls sit on the picnic
table, swaying to the music and laughing
at the brave souls dressed in only skivvies,
slipping, sliding and tumbling in the vegetable
garden as guys and gals tussle in the naked
mud wrestling tournament.

This is Hog Heaven.

Next door at the Church of the Nazarene,
they are singing and giving praise to the Lord.

On our side of the fence, we know Jesus
never rode a Harley.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pvd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Celebrating the Sabbath

Contributed by pvd on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:22:54 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Sunday afternoon the rain had stopped.

The inanimate bodies of the faithful
that had been strewn about the house
like piles of dirty laundry on sofas,
chairs and on beds upstairs, earlier
that morning had arisen. Lost souls
in search of new life, wobble
around half-awake and hung over.

It is the resurrection of the party.

A hodgepodge of hogs are parked
in the driveway and on the lawn,
under tarps and blankets or just plain wet.
One chromed Harley panhead,
a holy icon, with ape hanger handlebars
and a red flamed glossy black
fat bob gas tank, is sheltered
on the porch, beneath the eaves,
high and dry above the mud and muck.

Angel wanna bees and other Outrageous
* huddle around the boob
tube in the living room, watching
Sunday Services. American Football,
a Spaghetti Western with stale beer, left
over pretzels and soggy potato chips.

The Cowboys are getting scalped
by the Redskins.

Outside in the backyard, the beer kegs
are empty dead soldiers lying
in the mud. Bud in the can from the local
7-11 now provides salvation.

Friend of the Devil blasts from a boom
box, while three girls sit on the picnic
table, swaying to the music and laughing
at the brave souls dressed in only skivvies,
slipping, sliding and tumbling in the vegetable
garden as guys and gals tussle in the naked
mud wrestling tournament.

This is Hog Heaven.

Next door at the Church of the Nazarene,
they are singing and giving praise to the Lord.

On our side of the fence, we know Jesus
never rode a Harley.




Copyright © pvd ... [ 2004-08-02 07:22:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Celebrating the Sabbath (User Rating: 1 )
by oldernotwiser on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 08:11:35 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
GOD -- I Iove this.
on your side of the fence you DO know Jesus. Sounds like the bikes got baptized. I'll tell you what's enviable. Your writing habits. Looks like I've got some catching up to do.


Re: Celebrating the Sabbath (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:02:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
ohhh this is excellent! harleys are the only real thing the rest are decorations, hehe, great images too! love it:) hugs n' love nessa

@->.->:-


Re: Celebrating the Sabbath (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:04:19 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Another great vivid write, capturiing the essence so well of the atmosphere there. Felt like I was there (althought probably not in the mud...)

great job.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com