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Array ( [sid] => 58498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tonight. [time] => 2004-08-02 06:56:35 [hometext] => This is quite short. If you read my last posted poem "She Lives In Nothing", thatswhat happened to make me write this, this one hasn''t got what they did, it''s just about what was left of me last night. Please comment... [bodytext] => Tonight,
Is just another night,
When i've been drained,
Then left alone.
Tonight,
Is just a simple example,
Of why I HATE,
Living at home.

Tonight,
My emotions got to me,
And they crushed me down,
So hard.
Tonight,
Mum and sue,
Got the better of me.
They pushed me back into the DARK!

Tonight,
I cried my insides out,
Until there was nothing left.
Tonight,
I was all alone again,
I was split,
Right down my neck.

Tonight,
Is the night,
That i'll never forget.
I started off feeling happy,
Then I snapped,
And now I wished I was dead.
Tonight I still cry,
3 hours on.
I have endless tears,
I feel so numb!!!
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 48 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Tonight.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:56:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tonight,
Is just another night,
When i've been drained,
Then left alone.
Tonight,
Is just a simple example,
Of why I HATE,
Living at home.

Tonight,
My emotions got to me,
And they crushed me down,
So hard.
Tonight,
Mum and sue,
Got the better of me.
They pushed me back into the DARK!

Tonight,
I cried my insides out,
Until there was nothing left.
Tonight,
I was all alone again,
I was split,
Right down my neck.

Tonight,
Is the night,
That i'll never forget.
I started off feeling happy,
Then I snapped,
And now I wished I was dead.
Tonight I still cry,
3 hours on.
I have endless tears,
I feel so numb!!!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-08-02 06:56:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tonight. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:13:48 AM AEST
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This is just like the last one
in its content and meaning
This is not poetry
if you understand
If help is what you are looking for
come to me =)

Re: Tonight. (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:49:12 AM AEST
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I feel your pain deathdrop,
I cried so much last night i cried myself to sleep. This is a wonderful poem even if it is so sad. thanks for sharing hun *hugs you*

love
Gen xx

Re: Tonight. (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:49:21 AM AEST
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I feel your pain deathdrop,
I cried so much last night i cried myself to sleep. This is a wonderful poem even if it is so sad. thanks for sharing hun *hugs you*

love
Gen xx

Re: Tonight. (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:49:41 AM AEST
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I feel your pain deathdrop,
I cried so much last night i cried myself to sleep. This is a wonderful poem even if it is so sad. thanks for sharing hun *hugs you*

love
Gen xx

Re: Tonight. (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:23:26 PM AEST
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I've cried myself to sleep every night the past week...going through a hard time I spose. I feel your pain.
Best wishes for you,
-Drapes

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