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Array ( [sid] => 58459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No More, No Less [time] => 2004-08-01 23:32:03 [hometext] => I wrote this 30 years ago... things always get worse before they get better :o) [bodytext] => No More, No Less

Now that my mind is empty
I’ve got no reason to live;
for the many questions asked of me,
I’ve got no reasons to give.

And so I sit here useless
now I have ceased to exist;
my body is a discarded carcasses
lost in a forgotten mist.

Peaceful am I without you
but there is nothing left
but the traces of certain feelings
that stops my heart inside my breast.

All I have to do now
is to rid myself of the hate,
but I know from this condition
there just is no escape.

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No More, No Less

Contributed by MomentInTime on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No More, No Less

Now that my mind is empty
I’ve got no reason to live;
for the many questions asked of me,
I’ve got no reasons to give.

And so I sit here useless
now I have ceased to exist;
my body is a discarded carcasses
lost in a forgotten mist.

Peaceful am I without you
but there is nothing left
but the traces of certain feelings
that stops my heart inside my breast.

All I have to do now
is to rid myself of the hate,
but I know from this condition
there just is no escape.

G.B.A. 1974

Copyright Â© MomentInTime ... [ 2004-08-01 23:32:03]
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Re: No More, No Less (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:37:24 PM AEST
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this is one of the best poems i have ever heard. i think that this is wonderful. please read some of mine. they are not as wonderful as this however.

Re: No More, No Less (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:00:24 AM AEST
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Forgiveness is never easy, especially when the wounds are deep. Your poem is honest and deep without using many unnecessary words. It is as true and powerful today as it was thirty years ago. Thank you, this poem is a gift.

Re: No More, No Less (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:01:35 AM AEST
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aww, im hurt stew...

this was wonderful. this poem is twice as old as me, ahh. excellent write.

Re: No More, No Less (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:12:39 AM AEST
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Great write...... even after all these years.... Glad you posted it...
Jenni

Re: No More, No Less (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:53:40 AM AEST
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Things DO get worse before they get better! Such a truism! Well, if you wrote this 30 years ago, I need to go look up some of your recent works. Great read!
Thumps ; 0 )

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