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You call me names,
And say I’m useless.
You leave me with bruises and scars'
And you still want my love.
I can't take this ***** anymore.
Your killing me inside.
I feel like nothing.
I'm a nobody in a crowd of people.
No one knows me,
And I fear no one ever will.
I can't live my life this way anymore.
I can't take this ridicule from you any longer.
This is my last warning to you.
To stop this before I take my life.
I can't live with this anymore. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyro_88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I can't

Contributed by pyro_88 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I can't stand it anymore.
You call me names,
And say I’m useless.
You leave me with bruises and scars'
And you still want my love.
I can't take this ***** anymore.
Your killing me inside.
I feel like nothing.
I'm a nobody in a crowd of people.
No one knows me,
And I fear no one ever will.
I can't live my life this way anymore.
I can't take this ridicule from you any longer.
This is my last warning to you.
To stop this before I take my life.
I can't live with this anymore.

Copyright Â© pyro_88 ... [ 2004-08-01 22:33:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I can't (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:41:16 PM AEST
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how terrible to feel or write that way. get happy. whatever is causing this, get rid of it, her or him. write fun or love poems, make yourself feel good.

Re: I can't (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:48:44 PM AEST
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I do not know your exact situation but I can sypmatize. I have felt similar feelings. They are terrible and sometimes I still feel that way. Wonderful poem. Extremely well written.

Re: I can't (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:57:46 AM AEST
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There isnt a topic for pain hate hurt and continous betrayal.
I know what you go through my sister went through the same thing, until we found out, and yet it is strange she didnt talk to me again for years because I interferred and done unto him what he did to my sister everynight....Never did work that out....maybe I should've just butted out.
Lose the problem go find you someone that loves you, and I do mean love, no one should be someones elses boxing bag.
I know I am probaly way off track as to what this poem portrays, so if I am I apoligise and wil zip my lips.

Re: I can't (User Rating: 1 )
by answers on Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 01:12:01 PM AEST
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very meaningfull, dont stop writing

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