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Array ( [sid] => 58443 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Only Plan [time] => 2004-08-01 22:01:26 [hometext] => Please comment...it sounds dumb but they mean alot to me...thanx! [bodytext] => Could this be the end of it all?
Or is this just another time I fall
Maybe I will get back up
Maybe I won’t refill the cup

I have the choice, to end the strife
Or just keep on living my lonely life
Should I let go of who I am
And let my life become a sham

Too many decisions I have to make
I don’t know which road I should take
How much harder can this get
I’m ready to plunge into an endless pit

Pain and sadness, I can’t bare
Why is life so unfair
I’ve tried so hard to make things good
But nothing turns out like it should

Oh, how I wish to just run away
Just escape even for just one day
Leave the pain all behind
Maybe there would be peace I could find

I guess I’ll hold on for one more day
Until I find a good way
To live my life the best I can
That will be my only plan
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My Only Plan

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:01:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Could this be the end of it all?
Or is this just another time I fall
Maybe I will get back up
Maybe I won’t refill the cup

I have the choice, to end the strife
Or just keep on living my lonely life
Should I let go of who I am
And let my life become a sham

Too many decisions I have to make
I don’t know which road I should take
How much harder can this get
I’m ready to plunge into an endless pit

Pain and sadness, I can’t bare
Why is life so unfair
I’ve tried so hard to make things good
But nothing turns out like it should

Oh, how I wish to just run away
Just escape even for just one day
Leave the pain all behind
Maybe there would be peace I could find

I guess I’ll hold on for one more day
Until I find a good way
To live my life the best I can
That will be my only plan

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-01 22:01:26]
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Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:16:26 PM AEST
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this is a very well written piece, very down to earth and many can relate to it.

please read my post, two roads and see if it makes sense to you.

the voice

Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 10:21:23 PM AEST
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YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER AND I THINK EVERYONE COULD RELATE TO THIS POEM. YOU KEEP WRITING! READ MY POEM A FRIEND TO HAVE FOREVER. IT IS NOT AS GOOD AS YOURS, BUT I WOULD LIKE IT IF YOU WOULD COMMENT ON IT. THANKS.

Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:40:26 PM AEST
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Know how you feel Crimson. Moments like you've described tend to be part of all of us at one time or another - and they keep on being there as a reminder of how wonderful joy is, and the work that needs doing to achieve it. I've just posted a poem I wrote 30 years ago -fortunately I've kept all my writings so that I may recall where I have been.

"hugs an' all"

Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 02:19:39 AM AEST
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your feelings well expressed..well written..
concluding part is also good. best of luck.
venkat

Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:40:09 AM AEST
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Excellent! I can really relate. Your very good.
Blu

Re: My Only Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by CaseyRedman on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:14:12 PM AEST
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sounds like a good plan keep it up

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